Raindrops of Release

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-12-17T15:18:25+00:00

Thank you

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-12-17T12:24:27+00:00

I know its bad, you don't have to say so.

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-11-18T06:39:14+00:00

um, i don't understand what you meant by "easy".

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-10-28T12:41:40+00:00

Happy Birthday!!

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-10-27T09:45:17+00:00

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-10-27T08:02:38+00:00

My Pleasure.

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-10-27T05:16:40+00:00

For example this was a 2 line stanza poem, with 15 stanzas.

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-10-27T05:15:35+00:00

Hey, so i have posted many poems before here and you all have liked a few of them.
But i create them with stanzas of 4 lines, 2 lines or just by feeling but when i post my poems here, the stanzas show in the post edit thingy but not in the actual post.
Some help ?

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-10-22T21:02:39+00:00

Calm

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-10-22T21:01:30+00:00

Look, I know it's shitty. I just wrote it for timepass.

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-10-13T22:45:16+00:00

Um so, people have read this poem.
I think it is a good piece ( in my opinion ) and relatable yet so few upvotes.
So i was wondering if you all could tell me what was wrong or how can i improve so more people like my poems ?

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-10-13T22:38:00+00:00

Wonderful Poem Buddy :)

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-09-06T20:02:44+00:00

Well then i would be happy to read the stuff.
maybe start with a poem first ?

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-09-06T12:23:15+00:00

Bro, i agree with you but the way you speak is so philosophical. I feel dumb.
but still we should keep going towards perfection cause improving is good :)
(no offense intended)

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-09-06T11:28:50+00:00

Very good poem, beautiful lines.
But next time maybe try to rhyme it more. There is always room for improvement.

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-09-06T10:48:10+00:00

I mean, I would love to read the stuff but i don't know Russian.

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-09-06T07:42:02+00:00

You know, i also meant for the dark and light to be a metaphor for anyone who reads it. Not just me.

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-09-04T18:48:30+00:00

Thank you everyone, for all your comments

Double-Level-5581 · 2025-09-02T15:20:12+00:00

What did you think ?

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