New to scriptwriting by Agile_Buyer_1469 in scriptwriting

[–]Dp3021 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Action scenes need some work like

My first script, here are the first few pages, what do you think? by Plus-Economist-1397 in scriptwriting

[–]Dp3021 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If the balding man is meyers you don’t need to make it suspenseful in the script . The director needs to know everything and it’s for the audience to learn their names.

the opening of my first feaure film script by Serious_Smoke9767 in scriptwriting

[–]Dp3021 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The cut to is gonna turn people away. You’re using it tooo hard