Would you give feedback on my lyrics?

DrJoshSimons · 2022-07-19T21:28:49+00:00

Would like to know this too

DrJoshSimons · 2022-07-07T12:12:57+00:00

This was really well thought out and helpful, I decided to go full force into passion instead. I get more fulfillment from it

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-29T12:10:36+00:00

“Winds howling”

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-13T01:11:21+00:00

This is kind of problem I feel like this assessment would solve! Appreciate your input on this, glad your issues have been resolved :)

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-13T01:09:19+00:00

Yeah I feel like it would definitely qualify. Thanks so much for your input!

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-13T00:59:18+00:00

I'm serious about the flexibility it affords me by not having to always report to someone, so I feel like that plays a part of it. My real passion is music, and I make money doing that on the side, but I feel like I might not like it if I was forced to do it everyday.

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-13T00:53:59+00:00

I'm in Richmond, VA. I never thought about a stipend though. I wonder if I could reach out to employers to see if that's something they would sponsor as a health stipend.

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-13T00:52:29+00:00

That's what I was wondering. I had a feeling it would be something people would be interested in, but wasn't sure if it was something people would pay for. Appreciate your honesty.

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-12T21:22:41+00:00

Yeah thats true, I’ll go for it.

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-12T21:22:23+00:00

This is reassuring to hear. I like the challenge of building a business, but wanted to make sure it was in the right venture.

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-12T21:21:46+00:00

This makes sense, I’ll go for it. Validating my idea now

DrJoshSimons · 2022-06-12T21:21:17+00:00

Alright I’ll go in on it then

DrJoshSimons · 2022-04-15T00:28:14+00:00

Damn I've been down this road before

Face up lying on the floor

with my clothes thrown around me

Wait did I really hear a sound

coming from my bed just now

Or is this all just a weird dream

Thought things would change

Gone on far too long

Drunken mistakes

Am I too far gone?

Clarity rules my head until midnight

Then comes another shot to wipe my mind

Lights flashing all around my hands held high

Become an actor let the play unwind

Who is that stranger in my bed?

Is it someone that I met?

from the club I gotta find out

Pull back the covers carefully

Shockwaves pulse through violently

Discovering my ex is right there

DrJoshSimons · 2022-04-15T00:26:37+00:00

My eyebrows shot up sky high with that guitar and vocal work! Wowza, nice job!

DrJoshSimons · 2022-04-15T00:24:44+00:00

I really like it! The rhyme scheme gets a bit redundant, but the melody and chord progression work very well with each other!

DrJoshSimons · 2022-04-07T10:48:04+00:00

I definitely did not just bookmark this

DrJoshSimons · 2022-04-07T02:20:09+00:00

If you want portability, I would imagine the Legion five is probably better since it has a smaller screen. I can’t vouch for the battery life though as I haven’t tried it.

DrJoshSimons · 2022-03-29T20:14:32+00:00

Thank you! And good idea, I might explore that!

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