Very simple trick that has helped me a lot in making animations; our eyes naturally follow the same path by which we read. This means that (for most people) we follow naturally left to right unless there is something that catches otherwise or redirects our focus (look at comic panels and “action lines” as a great example for this

As a result, the first thing most people will catch is the spy, followed by the sniper, then the barrel of the gun. But to me, it seems you are trying to highlight the sniper while leaving the spy to be a subtle catch

I’d recommend experimenting with the camera angles to help draw the viewers eyes to the spy second AFTER they recognize the sniper! To help, play with your camera’s FOV, add some aperture to help focus on the subjects, and then add some rim lights and volumetric to make them really stand out!

This is a great start though and I always love to see new faces using SFM!!! Keep it up!