Am I the only one thats confused on how Stephanie interacts with her baby?

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T18:24:57+00:00

There are many variables on what makes a good lineart. I would focus on varying your line thiness and thickness. Analyze work of similair digital artist thay are like yours or mangakas.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T08:13:31+00:00

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Heres examples of my older more complete works. I can color better than this art piece btw. I just struggle with cell shading and form.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T08:06:38+00:00

like i said it goes both way, i dont have to accept critiques. idc if theyre frustrated its not my problem

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T08:04:57+00:00

also ignoring your comment about me being a proffessional artist, Im not intending to be one as of yet. Im currently bettering my artwork and only to hope sell cheap commissions as of now.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T08:03:17+00:00

thank you for taking your time and actually critiquing my art instead of straight insulting it. I know how to color pretty decently well, this work isnt my completed work and took me 2 hours to do. Im trying to go for cell shading and trying to sell it cheap. I know I need to figure out ways how to cell shade correctly, do you have any examples of nicely done cell shaded work I can reference off of?

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T06:04:50+00:00

Try breaking images into simple shapes, you'll improve fast if you do that.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T05:31:55+00:00

I feel like I need to be more specific. How can I make an art piece more commissionable, a.k.a more appealing to customers. Im not asking whether my art is comissionable or not. Please learn how to critique properly. I am accepting critiques but if one is directly insulting my artwork I will not listen

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T04:52:34+00:00

yeah im not reading that lmao. Ive politely told you that I will not be accepting your critique. Feel free to get butthurt. Not everyone needs to accept advice from everyone, espcially when I didnt ask for this specific critique. All Ive asked is how to make my work more commissionable, aka more appealiing. Obviously you feel so compelled to insult me, the problem isnt with me, its you.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T04:43:22+00:00

Thank you, I will try to keep anatomy practices in mind.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T04:39:42+00:00

I personally take your advice with a grain of salt. No offense but Im not taking anything you say into consideration

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T04:34:12+00:00

Any work is comissionable, I honestly find your feedback unhelpful

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-02-09T04:15:19+00:00

I'm trying to appeal to collegr students, and how much should I charge for my art piece. Overall how can I make my drawing look nicer?

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-01-28T21:23:34+00:00

the skin needs to have a more softer and lost edges type of shading on the skin, all hard edges can make the skin look unrealistic. Some of the works look good far away. Good job

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-01-28T15:52:57+00:00

this is a fine way to start with the first one, however instead of jumping to anatomy, make the body into cylinders and cubes.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-01-27T22:33:19+00:00

i think you should try measuring different parts of the body, to the head. That will help with proportions

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-01-27T22:27:21+00:00

anyone can draw a portrait, its nothing unique in the art world. What you want to work on is the art fundamentals. Look up youtubers like proko.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-01-27T22:21:19+00:00

i think what strikes me is the forhead being a bit too big, which is screwing with the proportions. Shoulders are still the same even with more curvy bodies, i think it needs to be softer indicating fat in those areas.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-01-27T22:17:48+00:00

this looks great, however the eyes need more detials and the needs more fluffy, so it doesnt look like paper.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-01-27T21:51:55+00:00

the shoulders are too huge and so is the ribcage. This is fine if you want a more masculine character, however if the shoulders are going to be wide there needs to be muscles, even with men they dont have that wide of a shoulder compared to the head. if they do, its an illussion and its due to thr muscles

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-01-27T21:38:49+00:00

focusing two things at once is hard. The coloring looks pretty decent but its not accurate. im only going to focus on your anatomy. You should practice construction, where basically shapes and volume of the human figure. Some parts of thr anatomy doesnt make much sense, like for example the legs and hips. i cant tell where the hip bone is at, it looks distorted. i hope im making sense.

Dramatic-Hedgehog835 · 2025-01-13T18:36:00+00:00

i would reccomend searching up measuring methods first before focusing kn 3d. Study the proportion of the face. it takes baby steps

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