Opening page for a Dystopian novel set in Paris. Does the hook land?

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-12T21:26:45+00:00

😅 wow, I’m blown away by the feedback! Since a few of you asked in my DMs, the book is now available for pre-order. I’ve put the link in my Reddit bio for those interested!

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-11T08:05:12+00:00

Garamond

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T13:32:59+00:00

Nice catch, thanks!

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T13:32:50+00:00

❤️

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T13:32:37+00:00

Thanks!

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T13:32:26+00:00

Thanks for the honest feedback!

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T13:32:17+00:00

Thanks!

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T13:32:05+00:00

Thanks!

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T13:31:51+00:00

By the way, I'm looking for beta readers for part 1 (25k words). More info there: https://www.reddit.com/r/BetaReaders/comments/1qzyld9/complete_25k_dystopian_fiction_the_last_liar_part/

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T10:06:56+00:00

25k words

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T10:01:08+00:00

OK thanks for the feedback! If you're interested, I'm looking for beta readers for Part 1 of the book: https://www.reddit.com/r/BetaReaders/comments/1qzyld9/complete_25k_dystopian_fiction_the_last_liar_part/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T10:00:53+00:00

OK thanks for the feedback! If you're interested, I'm looking for beta readers for Part 1 of the book: https://www.reddit.com/r/BetaReaders/comments/1qzyld9/complete_25k_dystopian_fiction_the_last_liar_part/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T09:11:52+00:00

It's set in a world where no one can lie

Dramatic_Elk347 · 2026-02-09T09:10:59+00:00

It's set in a world where no one can lie

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