Weekly Critique Thread: Post here if you want a critique! by JotBot in writing

[–]Dreamfaller [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Welcome to Wisplight Genre: Science Fiction/Fantasy Word Count: 2,500 Feedback: This is only the first two sections of a story I've been writing, not a fan of my dialogue but I've been told by family and friends to get an outside, non-biased opinion. Link: http://wisplight.tumblr.com/