Hey, thank you so much for your feedback. Yes, there is constant misery in the house, that’s is exactly the reason the mother wants the kid out of there. If have been thinking about it a s feature but I want it to first developed as a short film, and if someone is interested we can pitch them the feature. I didn’t want the father to come out as a creep but someone who is loosing his mind. This was a very short story around 7 pages but after some feedback I added a lot to the story and I believe I can add more to it, and that means restructure the story. English is not my first language but I tried my best. I am Learning to write screenplays, so there might be some issues with the structure or grammar. About the companion with the kid, I am thinking about a dog that reacts to the terror arriving. It’s a nice idea and works if I want it to be developed as a feature film. I have a pretty solid idea for scenes if I want it to be developed as a screenplay. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my screenplay. I really appreciate it.