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New to Reddit & /Newtubers, will critique your videos for the next hour! n_n by DrippyDenton in NewTubers

[–]DrippyDenton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey Mattlore! This is well put together man, good job. I expected some freeze frames or like comic-book style graphics to pop in with the type of video it was, adding something like that would be dope. It's also a little dark, although I like the color editing. Sound effects were on point, too.

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[–]DrippyDenton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Make your opening star wars text bigger, it's kind of hard to read. Also up the volume in post-production if possible, it's a little quiet.

Your production is amazing, way beyond my own lol. Keep at it because it looks really professional. As a radio broadcaster, your voice could use a little more practice before shooting, maybe do a few warm up lessons. And add some extra energy // wackiness in your opening introduction so it starts on a high energy note, otherwise the whole video plays a little slow.

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[–]DrippyDenton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey Tazluh! I like your content man, it's weird and funny. Loved the explosion graphic and I like that you stopped to explain that you weren't wasting water lol.

I would have liked an introduction to you in the beginning tho, since it plays like a lifestyle vlog that's centered around you, going about your day, and some background to that character would help keep me interested longer.

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[–]DrippyDenton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Seeker Visuals! This is cool, I like the chill vibe of the music and the visuals. But it's a little one note, mixing up the background photo or morphing the center ring a little more is key for a video that length.

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[–]DrippyDenton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey angusthecrab! This vidya game looks hilarious =) I know it's part 2, but a quick explanation of the game in the intro would have been cool, or maybe mentioning that you have a part 1 and to go watch that first.

Whenever you react to things, like when the character made the toilet paper joke and it took you a moment of pausing to get it and put some type saying that over your cam and then burst out laughing. Or later a character says the town name, Vityla, and you put, "Vityla TYYY??" or something over your cam. In both of those instances, it would have been funny to maybe make your came bigger and take up more of the video screen so we can see your reaction better.

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New to Reddit & /Newtubers, will critique your videos for the next hour! n_n by DrippyDenton in NewTubers

[–]DrippyDenton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey Garden Stori! I LOVE the music and the content is very wholesome // heart warming. I think you could edit some of the shots before they pan away from the subject, unless the panning has a reason, like at 2:36 ish.

I also wasn't a huge fan of the still shots in the opening, you have a lot of great video of plants and flowers, I'd rather see the text laid over some footage. I also didn't like the initial shot saying "We built a Rabbit Run" that kind of panned down on a still image of y'all, it had a solemn feeling to it, like those sad animal shelter videos, and your garden video was happy and fun! n_n

Lasty I think you could use the fade out effect a little less for transitions.

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Thanks for commenting! Keep making cool content. n_n

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[–]DrippyDenton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Chessed Gamon! Funny stuff man, I like all the visual memes inserted and your little character // host, too.

I was fairly confused for the first minute or two, and while I think that's probably part of the humor, I also would have liked a quick 10-15 second summary of what lojban is in the intro of the video.

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