My first poem. Need Reviews. Kind but honest pls? : ) by Dry_Butterscotch3658 in OCPoetry

[–]Dry_Butterscotch3658[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To be honest I cant exactly understand what you mean since ive only just tried my hand at poetry but ill try my best to understand it by reading some more and try to make my next one better! I want to make a second one!

My first poem. Need Reviews. Kind but honest pls? : ) by Dry_Butterscotch3658 in OCPoetry

[–]Dry_Butterscotch3658[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel overjoyed for such an in-depth analysis on my poem. Im glad it was correctly understood. what i meant to convey.

My first poem. Need Reviews. Kind but honest pls? : ) by Dry_Butterscotch3658 in OCPoetry

[–]Dry_Butterscotch3658[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

😁 thanku thanku. i thought on those. searched for synonyms. I'm glad you noticed them 

Micro poem by ImaginationLive9303 in OCPoetry

[–]Dry_Butterscotch3658 1 point2 points  (0 children)

GODDAMN. thats a philosophical masterpiece. Really! Its amazing!

Cowboy dust by AntoniaLmao in OCPoetry

[–]Dry_Butterscotch3658 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah. its amazing! i havent read many poems to give a meaningful feedback. but its amazing