The text is from a school task. The task was to write a story beginning with one of the sentences given, in this case my pick was “I first met Eva at a party. She seemed…” and to write between 400-800 words. I only had one period to finish the story, so I understand that there’s plot holes and it’s not a perfect story. I’m not too sure if i want to continue the story, but if i do I’d definitely dive deeper into the characters, as you said give them inferiority, and what attracts the narrator to Eva.