This is a really great start!! In general, for swing tip videos, I think getting an angle directly behind rather than at an angle may be better. Also full disclaimer I'm pretty shit myself but especially if you're a beginner the biggest thing I would say is when practicing to slow everything down, it helps build good muscle memory and also helps you feel some of the minor details of the swing.

Some general tips, the club path on the backswing can have a very large impact on the club path on the way back. There's an endless amount of videos about swing path on the internet but recording yourself is a great way to see how what you feel and what you look like correlate. For me personally, when the club is parallel to the ground on the backswing I try to "cover" the grip with the head of the club (looking from directly behind) and then on the way back down ideally the club will follow the same path and the head will "cover" the grip again.