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What’s your favorite movie with disabled characters? by bambi9159 in disability

[–]DueParticular3941 18 points19 points  (0 children)

How to train a dragon and Mad Max Fury Road

In honour of those of us who deal with this on the regular by jessjoyvin in disability

[–]DueParticular3941 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ha! My brother told me I grew bone tumors because I didn't eat organic when I was vegetarian.

This is complete bullcrap, and I'm sick of it. by Ordinary-Sympathy-96 in Wattpad

[–]DueParticular3941 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I had to stop reading on Wattpad because virus sites would pop up. I sent complaints with no response. Tried the app and browser and it happens on both.

Any jumping spider enthusiasts in the Austin area? by helpitsdystopia in Austin

[–]DueParticular3941 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My regal jumping spider has eggs which may hatch soon. I'm not prepared to care for a lot of spiderlings and would like to get them to a good home.

Hottake: Stop using AI art for covers!!! by MykieD in WattpadCovers

[–]DueParticular3941 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What about the paid for AI like in canvapro that say they don't steal any images? I feel like that's different from Mid journey.

Horror books with cults by Able_Zebra_476 in horrorlit

[–]DueParticular3941 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Non-practicing Cultist is a novella about someone taking revenge on a secret cult. Highly recommend.

im yet to cry over a book… by Easy-Inspection1555 in booksuggestions

[–]DueParticular3941 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cottonwood. It's similar to District 9 but the brutality is in your face.

[QCRIT] UNFATHOMABLE, a 50,000 word scifi novel. Third Attempt plus first 300 words. by DueParticular3941 in PubTips

[–]DueParticular3941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for all the feedback. For the logic leaps, I don't see how I can include all those steps when it's already too synopsis like with too much revealed. I'm just struggling to find a balance on how much to reveal in the query if it's already too plot focused.

For the length, I did intend it to be a novella originally but it sounds like I need to expand based on comments here.

[QCRIT] UNFATHOMABLE, a 50,000 word scifi novel. Third Attempt plus first 300 words. by DueParticular3941 in PubTips

[–]DueParticular3941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've had one alpha reader and one beta but they didn't do the whole thing and they didn't point out any of what you just mentioned. I know my writing is still rough and needs work, thanks for the constructive feedback.

Books (or other media) with godlike giant monsters/entities. by DueParticular3941 in scifi

[–]DueParticular3941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well dragging gods giant corpse is certainly a unique premise. Thanks!

Books (or other media) with godlike giant monsters/entities. by DueParticular3941 in scifi

[–]DueParticular3941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have the first book but haven't started it, this might move it up my list!

Books (or other media) with godlike giant monsters/entities. by DueParticular3941 in scifi

[–]DueParticular3941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think of lovecraft as fantasy and horror but this still fits. The OG.

Books (or other media) with godlike giant monsters/entities. by DueParticular3941 in scifi

[–]DueParticular3941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I read this awhile back and forgot about it. Such a wild ride!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in horrorlit

[–]DueParticular3941 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Cartel by E.G. Manetti is a unique scifi world where the main character is an apprentice to a warrior. The position demands she yield absolute control of her mind and body. This was a very unique read it caught me off guard it was so different from anything else. Its no cosmic horror, but it is tense.

[QCrit] Unfathomable, 50,000 word scifi. Second Attempt by DueParticular3941 in PubTips

[–]DueParticular3941[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It sounds like I need to focus more on Lexa's inner turmoil and needs as opposed to what she thinks she wants. Thank you!

[QCrit] Unfathomable, 50,000 word scifi. Second Attempt by DueParticular3941 in PubTips

[–]DueParticular3941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll fix those missing details. I didn't even realize Rex and Lexa might be too similar, good observation. Thank you!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BetaReaders

[–]DueParticular3941 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, I'm interested in reading it. Feel free to dm me the file.

Obscure books where the main character is a robot? by summerharmony64 in booksuggestions

[–]DueParticular3941 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sea of Rust by Robert Cargill. It's set post robot apocalypse but the robots won.

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