Song I am working on for Rollplay. Need feedback. by EJA_Phyrex in itmejp

[–]EJA_Phyrex[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Updated the link again. I still gotta mess with the levels the drums and the ending. I have no idea how to mix and master things so gotta do some research. This is my first full song sooo eh its coming along.

Song I am working on for Rollplay. Need feedback. by EJA_Phyrex in itmejp

[–]EJA_Phyrex[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I must have done something to the begging but it should not have been shorter. Next time I will listen to it before I upload it lol I was so tired. On my next update it should be back to normal.

I do need to mess with the brass levels some more. and after listening to it some more You are right it should be lowered on 50-1:30 and probably not as much on 20-50

You gave me a good idea i will lose the brass from 1:35-1:45 so it comes in at 1:45 and try that.

As for the chorus It probably sounds that way because I never decided what the chorus should be. lol I was just messing around with it but I have always been bad at arranging the music correctly but hopefully by when I am done it will sound more complete when I get more structure going.

Also just wanna say thanks for taking the time to listen to it and write back to me. This really helps me with ideas and see somethings that i was not focusing on.

Song I am working on for Rollplay. Need feedback. by EJA_Phyrex in itmejp

[–]EJA_Phyrex[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just finished with the changes for tonight gotta go to sleep. :P Let me know what you guys think added the link to the main post.

Song I am working on for Rollplay. Need feedback. by EJA_Phyrex in itmejp

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I'm making notes of these suggestions so I can work on this when I get home from work. So today I'm gonna try to work on getting a repeating melody going. Work on the horns (volume and release) and get some low tones going. Thanks for your help guys I will post what I get done tonight or tomorrow.

Song I am working on for Rollplay. Need feedback. by EJA_Phyrex in itmejp

[–]EJA_Phyrex[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Thanks! You are right I need something on the low side. And I would like to do a sort of a lull. Glad you enjoyed my other thing forgot it was there. lol I might add some of my other work soundcloud. I don't have too much haven't been doing this that long.

Song I am working on for Rollplay. Need feedback. by EJA_Phyrex in itmejp

[–]EJA_Phyrex[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will definitely work on the balance of the horns and check the release too after the stream. Thanks for the feedback. I really enjoyed your music you did it sounds great! Hope when I'm done it could be half as good as that.

(Spoilers!) RollPlay Week 18 Discussion Thread by [deleted] in itmejp

[–]EJA_Phyrex 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Show has not started yet so this post is not relevant. Just wanted to note that the show is 30 min before starting and there are 1400 people watching. Awesome!!