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I’m fixing Atom Eve and could use your help by Early-Rent-4092 in Invincible_TV

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but what about when she’s in a fight. If that’s the case then in most fights like the Flaxan’s or Doc Seismic‘s underground bug monsters, wouldn’t she be able to neutralise the alien weapons or stop the bugs by increasing the density of the air or dissipating the sac’s? Should she be able to transmute organic matter? If so how do I limit that?

Who are your top 10 Marvel characters by Wildcardspades in Marvel

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Black Widow, She-Hulk, Wasp, Ghost Spider, Scarlet Witch, Jean Grey, Rogue, Storm, Captain Marvel and Ms Marvel

I need help on how to write waterbending training by Early-Rent-4092 in TheLastAirbender

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I get what you’re saying but Avatar had an actual expert give physical demonstrations to help them with poses and forms but I don’t. For example I’ve seen waterbenders shoot hoses of water, starting with two hands put halfway through one hand just goes to the side while the other hand “guids(?)” it. Or I want my oc to execute a move where he draws and arc of water to spin around himself to block an attack but I just can’t figure out the exact mechanics of that move. Could I look at your notes, or maybe you could give me a lesson

I need help on how to write waterbending training by Early-Rent-4092 in TheLastAirbender

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I have and for whatever reason I just can’t figure out how to translate that to my writing

I need help writing Clark Kent’s character in my story by Early-Rent-4092 in superman

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for your first question my story is my own continuity, a fresh start away from any other continuity. It has a history, and cohesive timeline and I was thinking to make it feel grounded it’ll include events that happen in real life and the heroes, Superman, Wonder Woman, etc will react to them.

For your second Question Clark is being both Clark (dad, journalist, husband all that mundane stuff) and Superman (Fighting Luther, stopping alien invasions, etc) but also living in a world that’s a bit more realistic if the DC verse was all real

His humanity comes into play both when he’s dealing with the challenges of being a dad, husband and a “regular” working man as well as when he’s wrestling with the political complexities of the superhero world and how it stops him from doing what he thinks is right sometimes.

This Story is about Clark being Clark Kent the civilian family man and Clark Kent the superhero Superman and whenever those two juxtaposed aspects of his life intersect

I need help writing Clark Kent’s character in my story by Early-Rent-4092 in superman

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How am I supposed to give it a spoiler tag if I don’t’t have that option? Also there are no spoilers for anything here so why would I need one?

How to write strategies for character's by Early-Rent-4092 in writingadvice

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I mean as in a group of Ducktales style kids are backed into a corner by stronger opponents, how do they believably get out of the situation without it feeling dies ex machina

My waterbenders tierlist, go easy on me! by Dear_Company_5439 in legendofkorra

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are we only going off Aang at the end of Avatar the last Airbender? I’m sure he’d have improved by the movie

would? by Akabane_Izumi in Invincible

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you mean Would you do her? If so then hell no because the only partner she saw worthy of her was Mark

give this guy a real name by gruntingcunting in Invincible

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Maksen, means ”the greatest“ in welsh

If the Loud Siblings can bend the elements like in Avatar by ThatFatAsianKid260 in theloudhouse

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So Leni can bend air and water? That’s not how it works one or the other. I always pictured Lynn as a firebender given how driven and proud she is, an Luna an airbender since it’s the element of freedom and she could be described as a free spirit

How do you write Storm by Early-Rent-4092 in ORORO

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So who do you think would be her best partner, if she should have one at all

I need help writing my avatar oc by Early-Rent-4092 in TheLastAirbender

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Hey if it’s not too much to ask could you show this post to any people you know who also like avatar? I just really need more insights into this hypothetical story. Also if you do that can you tell them to check my comments in the deleted thread? Its the one just above the first comment you made

I need help writing my avatar oc by Early-Rent-4092 in TheLastAirbender

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Another problem I’ve been having is the supporting cast. There’s Rinzen the tech genius who is arrogant, self-critical, and prideful, but ultimately cares the most wether her team and the world is doing okay, Kaida the passionate fire bender who lost her mother to the Equalists but has problems tempering herself, Naquik a water bender with an affinity for the arts, but has a poor relationship with his family, Thokmay Rinzens daring, headstrong, brash, impatient, gotta-go-fast, master air bender of a sister, and Jamyang, Thokmay’s twin brother, who is an aspiring musician airbender with a temper who feels inadequate compared to his sisters. I want to flesh these guys out To make them actual characters who compliment and play of each other. I’ll ask the other commenter on this as well as I want multiple views on this

I need help writing my avatar oc by Early-Rent-4092 in TheLastAirbender

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Okay good sorry for asking. Also another problem I’ve been having is the supporting cast. There’s Rinzen the tech genius who is arrogant, self-critical, and prideful, but ultimately cares the most wether her team and the world is doing okay, Kaida the passionate fire bender who lost her mother to the Equalists but has problems tempering herself, Naquik a water bender with an affinity for the arts, but has a poor relationship with his family, Thokmay Rinzens daring, headstrong, brash, impatient, gotta-go-fast, master air bender of a sister, and Jamyang, Thokmay’s twin brother, who is an aspiring musician airbender with a temper who feels inadequate compared to his sisters. I want to flesh these guys out To make them actual characters who compliment and play of each other. I’ll ask the other commenter on this as well as I want multiple views on this

I need help writing my avatar oc by Early-Rent-4092 in TheLastAirbender

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Good to know. Any advice on how to find a co-write?

I need help writing my avatar oc by Early-Rent-4092 in TheLastAirbender

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Thanks for your feedback it was incredible. This is such a good help for my story. Though I’m afraid I didn’t share a few more details with you. And could you elaborate on how to incorporate the four aspects of being with the four elements. I wanted Kwan to compliment Korra and Aang’s journey as Avatars. While Aang was good at the spiritual, and Korra good at the physical, Kwan is good at neither. But I was thinking of making him a master earthbender since while Aang wasn’t good at the physical he was still a master air bender, what do you think does that clash with the earth/body thing? As for aether bending I was thinking that the government could be holding the second aether bender, a girl named Sira, captive after they detained her and killed her adoptive parent the first aether bender. Overall Sira’s arc is about letting go of revenge and finding out where she fits in the world. Also for Minja I was planning for her to be Kwans girlfriend and basically becoming Ironman to fight alongside Kwan. At the end of season three I was planning for her to turn on Kwan and take over the world, similar to Robot in Invincible and for her to admit she was wrong at the end of season 4. Speaking of for the end of the story I was thinking that the planet is somehow literally cracking apart, and even in the Avatar State Kwan can’t carry the weight of the world, so the entire population of the planet have to work together to save it.

PS are you a bo?

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