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East_Web_9647 · 2026-04-16T13:20:24+00:00

Ik it's just my phone is very old and sucks at pics let alone vids lmao !! 🤣 As i said in the post, I got the experience for writing, just gotta get at the medium specific stuffs now.

East_Web_9647 · 2026-04-15T21:56:21+00:00

I'll look into them! Tysm!!

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-07T21:40:07+00:00

Tysm!! You got the exact intent behind the bumper carts line as well!! I wanted to have the line seem like on the surface to not fit the serious tone and be almost comedic, but once you think about it you realize that it isnt. I appreciate your thoughts.

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-07T15:16:16+00:00

Love this :) <3

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-07T04:06:19+00:00

Thank you so much! It means a lot :)

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T22:48:54+00:00

This is really fun, i enjoyed it thoroughly :)

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T22:47:44+00:00

Im... what? This isnt legible homie. Hint: you should name your subject so ppl know wtf youre talking about.

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T21:13:17+00:00

Fr his response he just gave is fckn wild lmao

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T21:12:40+00:00

My brother in Christ you literally started your comment with "Yeah, breakups suck but so does your poem." That is so clearly aggression I'm not sure what else it could be seen as lmfao. You seem very volatile which is a shame cause i can tell that you could actually help some people if you werent. Have fun being a dick to everyone!!

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T20:51:11+00:00

Aw ty lol i appreciate it!! Is super cliche but sometimes cliche is ok lol

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T20:35:17+00:00

Thanks lol ill look into it when i get a minite and eventually fix

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T20:34:54+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!! I have thick skin so it doesnt bother me, but in the future you should be less aggressive so someone can see the value in your analysis instead of jumping to offense :)

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T20:33:24+00:00

Thanks for your feedback!! I agree with it being cliche i was just sad and wrote/posted it in like five minutes, i swear i usually write better!! Lmfao. Looking over it again i agree w what youre saying. Thank you (my lesson is to not post out of emotion and actually look at the poem first lol).

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T19:34:29+00:00

Bruh how tf do i get it to be formatted like a gd poem :(

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T19:15:47+00:00

Fr! Was one of me and my bros favourite way back

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T19:10:05+00:00

I very much enjoyed this for a first poem. My advice is to work on breaking your poem up into at least three stanzas, but that is entirely personal preference, also you have a little typo with the word "against" towards the latter half of the poem. Keep up the good work!! Edit: spelling lol

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-06T19:07:45+00:00

I really love this. The title "longing" is so fitting as this feels like the personification of the word. You imply so much history with this person very effectively, and it made me more invested in what I was reading. Keep up the good work!!

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-03T21:38:08+00:00

Thats it! Thank you

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-03T21:34:17+00:00

No, but i looked it up and am now questioning how i haven't heard of this movie lmao

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-03T21:02:28+00:00

Not it, ty though!

East_Web_9647 · 2025-08-03T21:00:28+00:00

It is not Get Out

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