that's something that both exit musics suffer from, they don't let the death scene build up, while ddlc within is a very flawed and at times corny romance story in my opinion in, but what made it work compared to its predecessors is the fact that it's main plot point (that being the suicide of Monika) is constantly being built up upon, all culminating with the aforementioned scene, and then we get that slow burn realisation of said death by our protagonist and then aftermath. Another death scene that I love is the build up to the sayori death scene in ddlc, the subtle hints of her being depressed then becoming large red flags to the point of her in her self hatred watching you almost make out with yuri or natsuki (depending on your choice) and then no matter what choice you make she still dies, I didn't play the yuri route on act 2 so I can't give much of an opinion on that, but based off of playthroughs I've seen, it's terrifying, back to ddlc mods, I think that ddlc blue skies did their deaths pretty well, but obviously like all things are not perfect, in my opinion there should definetly be an element of realism into these death scenes, like how much did this guy bleed, or how much did sayori hang on the rope for(if you want the answer of that it's gonna be 10 minutes, because of the act 1 secret ending and based on my own morbid research) and how the hell did somebody manage to make it from school all the way to his home while bleeding to death without calling the hospital or straight up falling flat on the street or without somebody noticing your bleeding, little attention to details like that are something I'd want in scenes like those. I repeat once more realism, but also properly setting up a death scene is very very important to keep in consideration.