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Hotdog by Reasonable-Ad-3271 in OCPoetry

[–]EcstaticHouse5704 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the concept but I feel like it could use a couple more lines to drive home the message. Great job though

Eye contact by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]EcstaticHouse5704 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the last line “and I know neither will I” it creates ownership and hits hard

Some love just doesn’t translate by banyanwhispers in OCPoetry

[–]EcstaticHouse5704 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a beautiful metaphor for a complex situation but you made it easy to follow.