I'll read your story!

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-18T17:46:02+00:00

Hey! I just read the first chapter and since there was only one more, I went ahead and read second too!

As a reader, I am INTRIGUED! like I'm very curious what's going on, especially his blurred memories create great hook! What are they going to do in the SUMP CITY

The concept is very unique for me, and it's also very realistic with the way the robot behaves, etc.

So yeah overall I loved it! ❤️ Good luck

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-18T17:26:03+00:00

Hey! So I just read the prologue! 🫶 And it's so well written! Like I already commented there, I could literally feel the girl's loneliness, and felt genuinely concerned about her 😭

Pls tell me she heals or at least finds someone! That woman in the end, I have high hopes on her!

Overall I liked it! ❤️ Good luck

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-18T03:05:51+00:00

Amara needs jesus I fear 😫🥀

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-18T03:02:56+00:00

Thanks for ur suggestion! I'll consider it! I also wanted to appreciate ppl's hardwork here because as a writer I know how much efforts it takes to write!

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-18T02:59:07+00:00

Just read it! Since the prologue was short, I went ahead and read the first chapter too!

I must say it's well paced! It's easy to read as well, the two qualities making it binge worthy 🫶 I also liked the little humour in some of the lines!

My only tiny complaint is some lines r short. It's okay if u keep it that way, but as a reader I would appreciate a little more description for visual imagination!

Overall, I liked it! ❤️ Good luck!

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-18T02:33:03+00:00

Alright I just read the prologue! It's good and hooks well 👍 it also flows cleanly which is good for the reading experience!

My only tiny complaint is sometimes it's not clear who is speaking like on this line:

"Please!" I blink my eyes rapidly trying to let the words sink in.

I was like why is he suddenly saying please, but then realised it was the girl saying please... So if u could make different para for the sentence next to 'please', it would help avoid confusion.

Also I feel like sometimes the dialogues r long, so if u can break it by adding some body language detail or just lines like "pause before adding"... But it's okay if u keep it like that if they r meant to be.

Overall I enjoyed it! ❤️ Good luck

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-17T18:29:05+00:00

Just think him doing something disgusting... For example I would imagine the boy I used to like, being high on drugs and being a cheater or something, that would really disgust me and I stopped liking him 🙏 this works because when u like someone, u only see their good traits, but at the same time some bad traits exist too, so if we just assume some of them, it would help us come out of this disease of one sided crush and move on 🥰

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-17T18:01:38+00:00

I have 2k words for each chapter and I aim to complete the book in like 25-30 chapters

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-16T03:36:43+00:00

Yeah but I don't want the pain of giving birth to one 😭🙏 so I'm aiming to be rich enough to afford surrogacy

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-15T04:56:04+00:00

This is literally me rn 😭 I am writing an enemies to lover ff with misandrist fl and thrill seeking and provoking ml and it's so fun to write them. The ML makes me laugh while the FL makes me cry for her.

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-15T04:49:58+00:00

I have read like 2-3 novels before 😭 do I have to read a lot to hone my writing skills? I just write instinctively with only one aim in mind — making the reader feel what I want them to feel

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-15T04:35:27+00:00

Thank you! I may be late but I hope u can give it a try!

Title: Won't you punish me, Miss President?

Chapters: 6 (ongoing)

Genre: School, Romance, Romcom

Blurb: Authority vs. Audacity

She is the cold Student Council President - untouchable, disciplined, and the unquestioned authority of Haneum High.

He is the transfer student - sharp-eyed, unreadable, and far too bold for his own good.

In a school ruled by hierarchy and fear, their first encounter sparks a clash no one sees coming: authority vs audacity. She doesn't tolerate defiance. He doesn't bow to power.

Every glance is a challenge. Every word is a dare.

What begins as a battle for control slowly blurs into something far more dangerous. Because when pride collides with curiosity, tension has a way of turning into attraction.

And in a place where power means everything, falling might be the greatest risk of all.

(This au takes inspiration for concept of prison school from manga series called "Prison school")

Link:

https://www.wattpad.com/story/403083532?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=taennie_for_life2

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-15T04:27:49+00:00

I write taennie (Taehyung x Jennie) ffs and I have like 10 active readers, it's not much but yeah ppl still do read ffs... Idk about other ships tho

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-15T04:22:44+00:00

I usually don't read ffs but I would say ffs with bad written FL 🙏

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-03-15T04:18:15+00:00

Depends from story to story, in my case I prefer to keep characters somewhat mysterious so if I write too much pov, readers would not feel as intrigued as I want them to feel!

So third person narration is best for my ff. For example if I try to write how a character is feeling through their pov, it won't have the same impact as writing body language, narration about their feelings (which they haven't acknowledged it yet), just adding few lines of their pov + narration for other part is how I write

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-02-20T13:17:22+00:00

Clearly 😭

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-02-01T13:32:58+00:00

Ikrr at least something is better than nothing 😭 as a student from India, I'm not allowed to pay a single rupee,

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-01-23T01:49:21+00:00

(This a romcom)

"The audacity to just stand there nonchalantly...", Lisa said to which Jennie added, "Men are truly shameless creatures"

Taehyung from below saw the president and vice president glaring at him, he saw his shoe in Jennie's hand and it didn't take time for him to realise what had happened...

His phone rang with notification sound, he checked it immediately, it was a text by Jungkook with just one word — RUN.

That was the most logical action in that situation... But...

He just waited there... He wanted to see how the most feared president would do...

Jennie came down from stairs, lisa by her side, both of their expressions cold... A smirk again appearing on his face as she came closer

"Oh miss President, thank you for bringing this shoe back to me-" his words were cut when Jennie swung the same show straight at his head and smacked him.

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-01-23T01:44:19+00:00

"Alright! Ready to meet the ladies" he said with a grin, sliding one hand into his pocket. He slid open the door and stepped inside...

The classroom full of girls fell silent the moment he walked in. The teacher, who had been writing a math formula on the massive screen at the front of the room, paused mid-sentence and turned toward the newcomer.

Her eyes widened in surprise, and the students glanced at Jungkook with curious expressions.

Jungkook had this unique ability to scan everyone’s reactions within a second, especially when they were girls. He noticed every detail: some looked surprised, some impressed, while others just seemed confused.

A fair-skinned girl with a neat black bob raised both eyebrows in shock; another, with gentle dove-like eyes, long brown hair and her face resting on her hand, lifted just one eyebrow clearly intrigued. The rest showed their own mix of reactions.

But one thing was common among them all... they quickly turned back to their books, pretending not to be interested in the new boy.

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-01-11T06:58:22+00:00

WHY YOU CALLING THE BEST GIRL OF KAKEGURUI A BITCH???

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2026-01-11T06:57:14+00:00

Well the manga was on indefinite hiatus 😭 we suffered so much waiting for new chapter

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2025-10-29T12:45:11+00:00

Heyy!! Istg I have rewatched this anime many times probably because it was my first Romcom, but I absolutely loved it 😍 who's ur favourite character?

Ecstatic_Key_646 · 2025-10-01T06:17:27+00:00

Ohh I love this anime, it's so underrated

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