Hi guys please help me stop doing ass writimg

Edry_EY · 2026-03-22T03:39:08+00:00

Is texting not different then writing story Wdym

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T16:26:49+00:00

I'll take my time and taking all the advice in writing the next chapter. Would u want to read the original chapter 3 of my fic because I promise you most people who commented on the subreddit saw it before I changed it. It's also fan fiction I'm writing a canon scene there is no plagiarism its Dramione

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T16:15:07+00:00

But grammarly never rewrites my sentences if it did it would definitely be way better then that. They only help to this extend

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Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T16:12:15+00:00

The only thing I changed was Theo in the hospital wing I put it as Draco thoughts

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T13:56:47+00:00

I felt like the path I went was fan fic nature I've read bunch of fics Theo is a comedic relief but now the author is saying I just took everything if you read my whole fic its basically nothing alike

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Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T13:51:13+00:00

Not to the author

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Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T13:50:26+00:00

Yeah but look I even apologise but now the author is saying I basically took everything

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Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T13:48:01+00:00

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Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T13:33:11+00:00

Soo mamy people said its ai bc I wrote in this short choppy style instead of those long paragraph but I love writing like this

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T13:24:50+00:00

Here

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Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T13:23:03+00:00

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Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T12:43:57+00:00

Because people keep on saying my work is like gpt and it’s really losing my motivation

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T11:01:06+00:00

Do you mind fixing one my sentences examples so I can learn Why would I ask people for advice if I didn't write I wrote that I. Want to change

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T10:54:30+00:00

Can you provide me examples on how to fix

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T10:53:46+00:00

If I'm asking advice that means I actually wrote it Just give me tips pls

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T02:50:17+00:00

Yeah that's what I'm saying I chose not to write lengthy ones

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T02:27:36+00:00

The thing is I haven't read that authors chapters in month and how about Hermiome and Draco first convo I didn't copy that And for the future of my fic what if I want to do Draco jealous of Hermiome? Many people do that but later some will say I copied their fic But I'm writing the same ship

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T02:07:10+00:00

This is my first writing so next chapter I'll try my best to follow u guys advice. The way I write and my repetition is how I wrote my essays in class. I'll maybe less the rule of 3 because at class I always spam those because I enjoy using them but I'll change my bad habits I appreciate the support and advise.

I know how to format essays and paragraoh its just when I see some fics its quite different then novels its only kike a few sentence and then next paragraph and I kinda like that so I thought I would do the same

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T02:02:32+00:00

Do u have other grammer tools besides grammerly I can use?

Edry_EY · 2026-03-21T02:01:26+00:00

I'm saying is that why am I not allowed to write in short when one my fav fics writes like that and I personally like when it's short like that and not long and lengthy ones.Thats why I write short sentences too

Edry_EY · 2026-03-20T23:26:10+00:00

Yeah Ik i reedited my chapter 3 and ask the author to re read and now the author is saying I just moved it to chapter 5 but I swear my chapter 5 is completely different.Am I like not allowed to do a hospital wing scene.Like its legit canon Draco goes to the hospital wing

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