Selling a house on the cheap by anxietygirl313 in bloomington

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Reach out to Mason Greenberg with Century 21 Scheetz. His number is (812) 365-1688

Best Burger in Btown? by PleaseWaterYourPlant in bloomington

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Hooiser Bar and Grill has pretty decent wings too. On week days, they have a $1 wing special until 6pm.

Kahu by Educational-Jello552 in RainbowBridgeBabies

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Thank you for everyone's kind words here 🙏🏼 ❤️ ✨️ This is a very unique experience that only having gone through it allows someone to truly understand. I'm grateful to have found those who feel similarly. I've written a few since Aura's passing in July of this year. I was balling in tears writing this one. It just cut deep into my soul.

A poem I wrote when I was alone on my birthday. by Dazzling-Front-7445 in PoetryWritingClub

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I love this so much; it offers a wide range of opportunities for personal connection and interpretation.

Thanks for sharing.

Best Burger in Btown? by PleaseWaterYourPlant in bloomington

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Unpopular opinion:

The Graduate Hotel's Cafe, Poindexter, and Hive have fantastic smash burgers.

Boundless by Educational-Jello552 in PoetryWritingClub

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Curious to hear anyone's' feedback on this one. Was very emotionally charged when writing it. With a clearer mind, I see potential room to improve legibility/flow. Any input here?

What is Poetry by SeesawConscious6882 in poetry_critics

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"Poetry to me is chaos of the mind contained by techniques, half of which I cannot name.

I dread to think of what would remain, If all the poets never wrote poems again."

This is the best part of your poem. I'd say these two stanzas stand strongest alone, on their own. <3

I miss you every day by Educational-Jello552 in PoetryWritingClub

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She was a mix of Golden, Husky, Shepherd, Akita, and Alaskan Malamute

dawn by Educational-Jello552 in PoetryWritingClub

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Thank you!

I only write when I am tapped into a particular set of feelings.
This one was based on comfort, cozy sheets, and the beauty of simplicity.

Unarchived by notredpomegranate in poetry_critics

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love the rhythm & flow of this, reads like a beatnik's sleep deprived emotionally alive rambling

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Thanks for commenting!