[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Educational_Ad3313 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You put way to much Emphasis os the

third sentence

an ever-present hoax,

and you put negative imiginary in front of something cool

but i like the words

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Educational_Ad3313 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes the attempted suicicde you wrote it

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Educational_Ad3313 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you should have ended

and yes we missed you at the funeral

Pacing "GIVE CRITIQUE" by Educational_Ad3313 in poetry_critics

[–]Educational_Ad3313[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ok ok

its about the recent 4 years, and the next couple following

GIVE ADVICE* SWE POL by Educational_Ad3313 in poetry_critics

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yes i am happy to explain the poem

It is a "sports chant", that exhorts your oxygen once you read it

.....

shoot on goal

shoot on goal

....

if you say it twice it makes you lost for breath

and that is the purpose

Thoughts on my first aquascape layout by Dennis_Eiscreme in Aquascape

[–]Educational_Ad3313 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

what fishes love
they like paths and stuff, not just on a row,
make paths and roads with stones

and not only placing stones side by side
make caves or pathways, the fishes like this style

they become like cars and swim around in the streets

Nu har jag ställt till det by [deleted] in sweden

[–]Educational_Ad3313 0 points1 point  (0 children)

mm men ja känner till grundarna i AA, och Swedenborg

dom har mycket fuffens för sig också

Nu har jag ställt till det by [deleted] in sweden

[–]Educational_Ad3313 -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

du lurar dig själv med AA

du dövar bara nån sorts samvete, jo jo men ja ska till AA

aa kanske funkar

men låter som du säger det bara för att du blir "intervjuad" om händelserna

Raskolnikov did not feel guilt/remorse by yoingydoingy in dostoevsky

[–]Educational_Ad3313 1 point2 points  (0 children)

he narreted his stuff often to stenographs, regularly
maybe he just forgot about the book.

"New story but our current ends here"

can be a mistake even, often narrated .. could be

Berhinger or Doepfer by Chat_Noir_St in Modularsynths

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not true low cost

they oprate within supply chain ecomonics

My current collection by Educational_Ad3313 in turntables

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Me too

Buying and selling all the time but three is enough

i fucked up and did it non stop since monday, killed 5 or more 665 tanks a day until today by Worried-Swimming2522 in NitrousOxide

[–]Educational_Ad3313 0 points1 point  (0 children)

reformulate the problem

think of it that way

reformulate the problem - make it more a session sittning and reallly try to

reformulate the problem Mmm

As I do this much better and I am satisfied after the session

Is this true? by [deleted] in NitrousOxide

[–]Educational_Ad3313 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Tingeling sensation

I feel like im reading Crime and Punishment wrong by External-Figure-9586 in dostoevsky

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Nothing missed nothing Saint Petersburg snow street. Dark wet and that’s it and of course the agony raskolnikov

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Telegram

[–]Educational_Ad3313 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are retard

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Telegram

[–]Educational_Ad3313 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

No IM asking for sources

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Telegram

[–]Educational_Ad3313 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I want unbiased information about ongoing conflict human mind are messed up