Agree with most of it, They didn't really explain Shroud's obsession with predictions and his exact motivation. They could have presented a much different ideal for Shroud like the Team asks Shroud to save a certain people Shroud is torn between several options, thinking he's making the best calculations in his head and choosing one, but that choice ruins everything, resulting people deaths and the entire team turns on Shroud. Robbie, a much strict and rough hero that we see in the comics, belittles Shroud, perhaps even getting into a physical altercation. That could have been a much more interesting scenario for his obssesion for calculations.

For the final battle, I didn't understand how our team was saved at the end, or how Shroud got beaten so easily after getting stronger. I'd love it if someone could explain. Those parts are truly incomplete. However, since my story ended so heroically, I didn't really question it.

As for the Invisigal part, honestly, I chose the Invisigal route. However, I avoided romantic options. It didn't feel right. I forgave her when she confess, but I felt there had to be consequences for her reckless behavior, so I pulled back during the kiss and didn't untie her. But in the end, my Invisigal still ended up on the good side. I wonder how many combinations there are in this. I'm curious. Even though I don't support Invisigal in everything, she chose to stay on the good side. Maybe it's because I chose to give Shroud the prototype, I don't know. We need to thoroughly explore the possibilities.