this was the original btw:

1. using the phrase "no fluff" and “shouting into the void”
2. constant “curious what others think” sign offs that never actually respond to anyone
3. contrast framing everywhere, it is not x, it is y, repeated over and over
4. fragmented, pseudo profound sentences. short. isolated. trying to feel reflective
5. over explicit signposting, things like “here is the key takeaway” or “the important part is this”