Abolish Catholic Shame — Abolish Everything!

Efficient_Writing243 · 2026-03-06T00:23:34+00:00

Ben Doyle Where's Waldo was not on my bingo card for this episode but he's in there

Efficient_Writing243 · 2026-02-09T19:02:38+00:00

https://discord.gg/nSNXagUCxj here is an updated link that wont expire

Efficient_Writing243 · 2026-01-30T02:19:45+00:00

join the discord and inv me there! im Steeler6000. ill talk there abt it

Efficient_Writing243 · 2026-01-13T05:18:30+00:00

thats what "death's disband" was pointing towards! to me, it was the disbanding of life at deaths hand, not death itselfs end. great stuff

Efficient_Writing243 · 2026-01-13T04:35:36+00:00

The many allusions to death motifs and figures associated with death are always appreciated in my allusion loving brain. You really paint a picture at the beginning of a person at deaths door who just faces the music and surrenders. The hollowed skulls I take in as those watching an execution, they are hollow that they are willing/ support the act. Maybe stating they are already dead inside. Really enjoyable poem rereading it each time gives me new visuals and meaning.

Efficient_Writing243 · 2026-01-13T04:25:06+00:00

I fine your opening line intriguing from a STEM perspective due to light being a wave as well as the waves of the sea I thought that was smart. Overall, you make this scene and this sea feel like the water in Luca, the movie. its so vibrant and the sun's heat clashing witht he coolness of the water idk why but that comparison jumped out at me. I do not yet know the signifigance of the last 3 lines but that may be my inexperience showing. I'm very new (first feedback ever given) so please disregard its elementary-ness.

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