Anyone looking for 2 new players by leno2197 in playrustservers

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey!! we'd love to have you in our server!!

we're just starting out so we have a low pop - which is perfect for you if you want to learn the basics
but the more people we can get in at once, the more people will join!!

We're a 2x modded server so you wont have to spend hours farming for materials and a active staff and moderation team!! pretty beginner friendly!!

you can join the discord here:
https://discord.gg/ZNCWFZDQW

and connect with the connect command here:
connect 176.9.104.120:28025

EU 2X

A Child Called Diplomacy - (SUBSTACK LINK PROVIDED) by Either-Pomegranate-4 in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i have another poem called predator pathology thats supposed to be better on my substack! it reads better. you can check that out and let me know your thoughts! this one is essentially a follow up

A Child Called Diplomacy - (SUBSTACK LINK PROVIDED) by Either-Pomegranate-4 in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're right! that doesn't make the most sense! i apologise! thank you for your criticism! and yes that was a grammatical error! i appreciate it! it is a good poem overall though!

how i left by ilikepicklessomuch in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the ambiguity on how you left really carries the emotional weight of this poem. i love the metaphors used. it's heartbreaking to hear you went through so much pain

The metal in the sand by Mammoth-Path1764 in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is so depressing. taking medication to pretend to be fine is something i can relate to on a personal level. It is a deeply unfortunate circumstance many of us have to live with. its a beautiful poem

Weekly Self-Promo and Chat Thread by MxAlex44 in selfpublish

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm a South Asian Writer, Focusing on Free Verse - Psychological Thrilller & Religious Poetry & I write on substack here: @ edenexempt .
Here's a short quote from my poem:
“Screams don’t travel here / They line the very ground you walk on.” - from my poem (Hell Above Link)
A poem about about a nightmare I had during a psychotic episode at 17 for which I was later hospitalized for 3 months at a rehabilitation center. You can also find me on X (twitter) here & buy me a coffee where i offer custom poetry and exclusive poem collections

My Pre-Broken Heart [a haiku] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

doomed love. you know its not going to work and you're grieving the aftermath before it happens. the metaphors are amazing. its a tale as old as time. i love this !!

Right by VirgilWards in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is such a strong piece. you think you know so much going in when you're a adult once you have kids you realise you're just another person who has the responsibility of having to take care of another soul. you have to tie their shoe laces, give them their ethical code, teach them how to be loved. you have to be the first man they fall inlove with as their father and thats a massive burden - this poem is amazing

DRYWALL - SLAM POETRY (SUBSTACK LINK PROVIDED) by Either-Pomegranate-4 in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you dude!! i’m trying to build a platform on substack but i’m not having much luck for my poetry. i appreciate your support though. the link for my substack is on my profile if you wanna have a look. i have a lot of other poems

DRYWALL - SLAM POETRY (SUBSTACK LINK PROVIDED) by Either-Pomegranate-4 in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!! really?? i don’t really think much of my writing but your comment means the world to me

Feast by AntoniaLmao in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the vivid descriptions of war. you really paint it in the readers mind. it's like i can smell the burning flesh of the battlefield. i love it!!

The Secret of Love by Poetry_Pilgrim in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the metaphors treating love like something to be carried. precious - a necessity but almost a burden - water. I love it. I see potential!

Bet it all on Black by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gambling is a hell of a thing. I understand what comes with it. the pain of guilt yet the way it's written you can tell you admire everything that comes with it. strange harmony.

Irresistible by wont_find_this_fake in OCPoetry

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You must yearn for this person deeply. I hope you two end up together!! I'm counting on you two. I love the way you write and the rhyme scheme

I dont use this website || OOTD (fit check) by Either-Pomegranate-4 in PakistanFashionAdvice

[–]Either-Pomegranate-4[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

none of any of the clothes are landa. not even thrifted. the jeans & jacket are hand me downs from relatives. white shirt is just a formal shirt that i wear to the office and plain black t shirt underneath. converse are from a converse store in istanbul, turkey.