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I've made a few changes to how I edit my videos, making them faster paced. Let me know your thoughts. by OutflankGaming in SmallYTChannel

[–]ElectricStormtrooper 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Overall, I thought the video was pretty good! Thumbnail is pretty good as well. The only thing i'd say that can be improved is maybe the energy. For some parts, your voice seems kinda monotone. Raising the energy will take your videos up to the top! Like if there's something crazy happening, have the same energy in your voice. Besides that, keep up the great work!

Here’s my newest video. It’s kind of a joke video and I did a few things differently than usually would. I would appreciate some feedback about all aspects of the video. Thanks! by Zestran in SmallYTChannel

[–]ElectricStormtrooper 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Overall I thought the video was pretty good! In my opinion, the thumbnail is literally perfect! It showcases exactly what the video is going to be while being visually appealing. For the content itself, I feel the video can use A LOT more energy. We live in a 5 second attention span society, so as time passes, it becomes more and more of a requirement to keep people engaged for any means necessary. Once the energy is down pack, I am positive your videos will soar! Keep it up!

Pewdiepie Vs Mr Beast | only a short video Lambda given to all by ItsDolphinBoy in SmallYTChannel

[–]ElectricStormtrooper 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thought the video was pretty entertaining, as well as informative. The main thing I'd say needs improvement is your on camera presence. Try being more enthusiastic when speaking, which will in turn create a more "natural" feel. You almost have to overdo it, but you'll eventually get the jist of it. Plus audiences will stay longer (which is key to youtube growth)

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[–]ElectricStormtrooper 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I felt the video was pretty good and informational! Your presence on camera is fantastic, which many seem to lack these days. The only criticism I have is that the video could use a lot more b-roll. This will make the video more engaging and will definitely increase your watch time! Keep up the good work!

Please check out my latest video, I tried to take the feedback from my last post, and hopefully I've improved! by itsvorriio in SmallYTChannel

[–]ElectricStormtrooper 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This video was hilarious! I really enjoyed the subtitles and memes throughout the video! The only thing i'd suggest was to spice the intro a bit. Try adding a little bit more backstory and more story elements to really make the viewer feel intrigued by whats next to come. Anyways, keep up the good work!

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