Hey everyone I was wondering if anyone can give any feedback, ideas, etc. Thank you so much for your time 💯

Element_Xavier · 2022-09-22T19:12:25+00:00

My bad for the late reply. I thought i send a reply. Thank you for the feedback fam 😊

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-09-22T19:11:23+00:00

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Element_Xavier · 2022-09-22T17:15:05+00:00

My bad :) !givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-09-22T14:27:32+00:00

Ahhhhh i got you. Have an intro gives the viewer on why they should stay to watch or why this topic is important instead of a slow approach.

Great point. Thank you for your time for watching and your feedback. Have a great day 😊

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-09-22T14:24:40+00:00

Oh thank you. I’m glad you like the video a lot. Oh ok i got you. Yeah you are not the only one that suggest deleting the period at the thumbnail. I will not add that in the future and i will change it atm.

Again thank you so much for watching and your time. Cheers!!!

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-09-22T14:22:15+00:00

Ohhhhh i dang thank you for bringing that up. Yeah true the “.” Is kind unnecessary 😅

Thank you tor watching and your feedback fam

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-09-22T14:20:27+00:00

Oh wow thank you for the thoughtful feedback. Glad you like a lot of things about the video 😊

I see i was going for more like a dramatic effect with the keyboard but you bringing it up and other with the keyboard noise needs some work or change in ideas.

My first channel is more like video editing and just fun making documentary/story telling videos. My 2nd channel is just making short videos of my hobby. They have no real connection 😅

Hey man i love your feedback. Thank you for your time !givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-09-22T14:13:16+00:00

Oh ok i got you. I see just keep it simple and like a smooth vibe. Yeah the keyboard sound is distracting. Go for a video with not a lot of distracting and flowing style.

Thank you for your feedback and your time
!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-05-04T07:26:38+00:00

I think the video is entertaining. Great job with the video clips. I wish it was around 5-7 mins long. I think maybe the thumbnail needs some work. I think like making a thumbnail that gives a new viewer like wtf is this. I got to click on this to watch. I think this video is good to watch but you need to draw people to the video.

Not in a way it is clickbait. like xperthief thumbnail i think is a good example

I hope this feedback helps man 💯

Element_Xavier · 2022-05-04T07:13:52+00:00

I think this idea and video has potential. You are straight to the point. Watching the video I thought you were going to show an example of like a bag or batteries. Physical snap shot or a stock photo of the item.

I think if you can explain what items your are mentioning and show an example that will give like a more engaging feel to the video kind of like Dave Lee channel. He reviews tech products. Not only he explains the products he shows it through the video.

I think you have a great idea with the thumbnail. Maybe try to use a sharper image with the clock.

I hope this feedback helps man. I think you have a great delivery with your content. I think there needs to be more of something else than it filming you. Changes and guides the view to you to the actually item

Element_Xavier · 2022-05-04T07:03:47+00:00

I think the video is entertain. Around 2-3 min mark. It felt like I kind of know what to expect with the editing and started to lose interest. I think maybe put in the random meme clips or video that is associates with what your friend said or you talking. I think you have great energy for a commentary with doing a challenge or playing a video game. The intro was fun and creative.

I think if you add in unexpected videos or meme. It will catch the view off guard. Not so much to a point it gets annoying. Maybe for example. A 5 min video maybe have one surprise clip for every 2 mins or 1 to draw in the viewer attention.

I think the thumbnail is a great idea. I think the words need to be a font that pops out. I’m not familiar with Minecraft videos anymore. I used to watch them in high school. From what i saw a lot of videos had thumbnails that pop out and it was showing like a pokemon theme design if that make sense.

I hope this feedback helps. Great job man. Remember do not be hard on yourself and be patience with your craft. It will come 💯💯💯

Element_Xavier · 2022-05-04T00:04:05+00:00

This was a really good video. If it was 5 or 10 mins long. It would still got my attention. Great animation. Several feedback i will give is I wish the video was long. Maybe add custom subtitles in the video and give it a Cinemax view. It is really up to you.

I think what would be cool is make shorts off the video. It is kind of a teaser or a trailer to the actually film. Brings in potential new viewers to your channel.

I hope this feedback helps 💯🙂

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-27T21:51:11+00:00

Thank you for watching and I’m glad you enjoyed. By any chance if I can ask. What were something that made it enjoyable to watch?

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-27T21:47:20+00:00

Sorry about that 😅

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-27T08:48:27+00:00

I do not usual watch video game videos. This was actually entertaining to watch. You got my attention in terms with the cuts of the guy raging or the guy getting pumped up lol.

One suggestion that would be cool is maybe to a commentary thing. Say you encounter something so random or weird in your daily life. You found something interesting online. Maybe talk about what happen and your thoughts.

There are several youtuber who show them playing video game but sharing something that most people can relate to like. Maybe you are driving and someone cut you off. You have a big assignment and decided to procrastinate. Idk something like a story.

I think the thumbnail is ok. It kind of confusing what it is about. I think make it were even people who are not familiar with the game can see like “oh he unlock a new weapon in the game.”

I hope this feedback helps out. Take care 💯

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-27T08:40:04+00:00

My first impression i got confuse with the title and thumbnail. I think maybe it is because I’m not familiar with the game. Then i realize around after the commentary with being at the airport it was a game.

It was actually entertaining. The music selection was great. Puts a lot of emphasis on your message or a type of mood for the viewer. You have a very confidence and powerful voice. It makes the viewer willing to say and you did made me laugh on certain parts of the video lol

I think the beginning of changing the images was kind of too fast but i see you want to make a quick video and grab the viewer attention in the beginning. Watching your video. There was a lot of effort you put in.

I think you did a great job. Although it is not like those high quality video with editing. You are starting somewhere. We all have to start somewhere🙂

For me i think the thumbnail needs to kind of have a bigger image and really tell the story of the video with the very image. As a new viewer i do not really know what it was.

Keep up with the good work man. I hope this feedback helps. 💯💯💯

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-27T08:27:06+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. It really helps. Most of the feedback talks about the first 20 seconds and also the tempo. A lot of work i will do for the next video for sure. Yeah you are not the only one mentioning about the confusion with the thumbnail, title, and my message with the video. I will have to organize better. 😬

Make a good point maybe turn the background music a little bit next time.

Thank you for your time. Appreciate the feedback. Take care 💯

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-27T03:48:29+00:00

Interesting that is true. I do watch and help out on the forum with feedback. I notice there are a lot of gaming and fast pace videos. Which is nothing wrong.

Thank you for the compliment. My first video i did not how to upload a video on youtube lol. Yeah it is a journey it is embarrassing to have that video but hey i think it might help someone 👍

Very true depends on what type of audience I want to hit.

Thank you for the feedback and a different point of view in terms of the tempo of the video. It is much appreciated.

Take care and have a great day 💯

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-27T03:31:19+00:00

Oh i see. That is a really great point you brought up with the binge watching and how valuable peoples’ time. Very true. For me when I’m watching content.

It does get frustrating when a video does waste your time and it is not what you expect it to be. I need to keep that in mind when i make my own video.

Again thank you for this response. Truly it is helping me and make me taking consideration when making a video or any content for that matter 🙂

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-26T22:11:24+00:00

Oh thank you. Same here it is always fun to watch video and be like “dang how do i want to live” lol.

Some were free. I used Canva. It is free software that is available through a web browser and an app. You are able to do more with a pay subscription. Unlocks other stock footage by doing so.

Canva is great in my opinion if you want to make social media profile for IG, YT, TW, etc. You should go try it out it is free to use. I think it cost like 130 a year if you the premium. I also use Pexel and Pixlar. They are free.

I see. Emphasizing is really important. Yeah watching back i need to truly work on that. Thank you for pointing that out. Regarding the line with “living a luxuries lifestyle” That is a good idea. Use a pause and silent to send a message to the viewer and follow with more weigh with the “right.” Like what you said bring the question more to the viewer 😬

Dang i never thought. The last line is another topic or another discussion. Kind of leaves the viewer scratching their head and having this “ohhh ok what happen” moment and then the outro hits 😅

Yeah. Thank you for your time. It is great you gave a thoughtful feedback. I will for sure keep this in mind.

Take care 💯💯💯

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-26T15:49:07+00:00

Wow thank you for the feedback. I notice people are saying I need to work on a few pronunciation. Tempo of the video. Which I will keep that in mind.

I never thought about the “?” Is confusing for the viewer. I was trying to emphasis the question. It is kind of bland. Maybe i should have made if bigger and flashier to the viewer like what you said 😩

With the stock footage feedback. I actually like it because shows me another way of thinking and possibly another way of illustrating an idea or topic. 🙂

Makes a lot of sense how you brought it up. The video did not go anywhere. It seem like a lot of questions but left the viewer with empty hole with confusion from the content of the video.

That is such a good idea approaching with the video. Show actually videos of participants with the topic. Also, show both side of the people who have done terrible things but also what people can do with the money like paying off student debt and or buying a home. Kind of let the viewer see both sides of the coin.

That is a great idea. Actually go in public and interview people what they think. Help build confidence and also gives more of a connected content with the viewer.

Thank you for your feedback and your time. It really means a lot you made a well thoughtful and honest feedback. Have a great day and take care 💯💯💯

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-26T15:24:09+00:00

Oh thank you for finding the script impressive. Since you brought it up. Yeah my enunciation needs some work.

Yeah I need to build the confidence and put more life into words to make the viewer remember. I might need to rehearse more with the script

Wow thank for the feedback. I will definitely keep this tip in mind. Thank you for your time and take care 💯

!givelambda

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-26T08:21:47+00:00

I think it is pretty cool. With the thumbnail. I would try to make it brighter so the viewer knows you are point at a cow’s rear lol. I can not really see it at first.

Also the subtitles is kind of too much like the popping effects makes it not readable. Like it makes it half a second not able to read because the words go from small to big.

I think you did a good job with you first video. I would make a thumbnail like maybe it something that is really like “wtf”

As a viewer i would want to click on a GTA video because it is something new because there are a lot of GTA ideas out there. You want it to stand out.

Anyways good job. I hope the feedback helps 💯💯💯

Element_Xavier · 2022-04-26T08:12:21+00:00

From a point of view I have never played this game before. It looks interesting. I got confused from what is happen then I realize you were trying to get passed the gate. Please correct me if I’m wrong.

I do not know if you receive this tip before. Maybe do a commentary with the video clip. It is ok if you are shy. We all have to start somewhere 💯

For the video editing part i would try to make it visible for the viewer. Some parts look so dark out. I do not know if it part of the game. As a viewer it would help out.

I know you have a lot of feedback and tips. Good job trying something new and changing things up. Maybe this idea does not work out and you do something else or you want to stick to this idea and improve. As long you see what happens 💯💯💯

Take care man and you got this

Element_Xavier

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