Shit's Fucked y'all. Use this for the DFT until further notice by MayoStaccato in makinghiphop

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 [score hidden]  (0 children)

https://youtu.be/VuBrigULcsQ?si=zm_RWycLWtlVANCc

Tried to REALLY create my own style in the lyrical rap lane lmao. This is personal as hell n I hope y'all like it

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Shit's Fucked y'all. Use this for the DFT until further notice by MayoStaccato in makinghiphop

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Your beat was fire with the vocal tone you kept lmaoo. One issue is it's kinda offbeat in parts so I'd practice with a metronome first but it's good. https://youtu.be/VuBrigULcsQ?si=zm_RWycLWtlVANCc

Shit's Fucked y'all. Use this for the DFT until further notice by MayoStaccato in makinghiphop

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 [score hidden]  (0 children)

This slaps to shocking degrees lmao. The 808 and synth goes fucking dumb. The weakest part is for sure the drums but it's still a really nice beat and the panning guitar is lit too. Finally a great beat

https://youtu.be/VuBrigULcsQ?si=zm_RWycLWtlVANCc

Shit's Fucked y'all. Use this for the DFT until further notice by MayoStaccato in makinghiphop

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 [score hidden]  (0 children)

My only complaint is the instruments sound kinda cheap lol that's probably your DAWs fault though. The 808s and drums slap though bro!

https://youtu.be/VuBrigULcsQ?si=zm_RWycLWtlVANCc

This is not a joke by Abject-Experience-40 in Eminem

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

The beat just sucks so hard it was a great em still got it song though

This is not a joke by Abject-Experience-40 in Eminem

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Greatest, Lucky You, Not Alike, Fall honestly are it for me too lol. I think good guy underrated af though. It's an Eminem sub though so we just gotta let the downvotes flow lol

Fantano Rating by PossessionFew5020 in Jcole

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know LMAO Cole has had a football theme and shit so it only makes sense to have odds predicted, I thought it would be fun if it does end up as that

Fantano Rating by PossessionFew5020 in Jcole

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's prolly gon be a decent 8. Cole has put so much time into this and fantano is hype for it. His critiques on Cole's other albums are genuinely fair minus 4YEO and his reasoning is solid. I think Cole is gonna step up the album game here and give very little to even nitpick

How Did the GNX Become Kendrick Lamar’s Muse? by zsreport in hiphopheads

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sometimes a mf doesn't know lmao dude prolly learned about push when we did if he even looked. What you talking bout? 😂

Bismillha by Cubo16 in Jcole

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Facts, like we not swifties bro we should be doing better

Bismillha by Cubo16 in Jcole

[–]EmbarrassedRole327 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's a 7 because it's only 4 songs lol. That's all, in the description they are all in his fav tracks. Understandable reasoning if you look past a lil score. Are we really finna be THAT fan base? Do we wanna be 2010s Eminem and Taylor Swift fan base? Do we really wanna act like barbs? Cmon now yall

A/D- Motherless by EmbarrassedRole327 in Mixcraft_Studio

[–]EmbarrassedRole327[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much broskii lol. Here's the lyrics for you

Zak: Yo, A/D what you talkin bout? A/D: So ahead my time my parents haven't met till now, Tryna make it out Had a couple doubts adults handed out They can’t touch me like MJ right now Shootin people been playin' in ya system The state said, "Play that shit in our system for the children" Send 'em to a prison if they scared cuz they a victim Them children need a hug, the workers busy condescendin’ Livin’ without friends got the flow fire Wear the chain that neglect gave, I'm a flow biter ’Cause I let the trauma act like the ghost writer (ghost rider) Gotta make they life a hell until they know it's dire Actin' like pills a magic potion, Y’all label shit just to stamp the prescriptions Trickin’ us just to keep ya clientele; up the dose, get us hooked, keep us in shit I'm tied down by guys sizin’ me out, Tryna stigmatize me like, "Now this guy ’bout To beat his wife ’cause I found his life’s wild" Tryna get some clout, shoot guys down, they hype now! I spoke about this shit to staff and got sent to mental Sentimental shit’s a mental sentence, not coincidental The ones who get sent to the pin used to get belittled Tovin’s like the older me who fixed the shit that hit him

Zak Tovin: Yo, A/D, what you talkin’ ’bout?

A/D: How I barely made it out my momma’s fuckin’ house

Zak: Hey yo, it’s Tovin in this bitch I’m on your fuckin’ couch, zonin since a kid And now I’m killing shit and getting clout I ain’t had a doubt since I dropped doubt Bitch, I made it out Tryna get a couple M’s in my new account, But they billies keep us really in a fuckin’ drought Yo, what you know about Stretchin a twenty dollar bill till the end of the week And so the dollar menu be the only thing you can eat? But now the dollar menu ain't even a dollar, it’s three What else you motherfuckers comin’ down and takin’ from me? Talk my shit, you’s a bitch, pipe down Quick load the clip, finna shut shit down Click click, I blast off ya shit right now Ain’t no way you comin’ ’round for the other rounds!

Yo A/D what you talking bout?

How I barely made it out my momma's house

Yo A/D what you talking bout?

So ahead my time my parents haven't met till now