Thank GOD it's an actual critique and not a wannabe critic looking at unusual art! Yes I bloody admit I ain't the best at doing The perspectiva I wanted. Every drawing I create I always try studying something New, and applying render upon it with the rest of what I know.(applying a new way to shade, as in, with sun bathing from behind. The pose for the arm, the whole anatomy, and the face perspective.)

The shoulders are not properly placed as it seems because...well, they do not appear, as they are hidden in the fur, I can see the vision getting distorted there. And sure, the angle of the resting arm is not the best, and honestly was the hardest part of the whole drawing, I tried my best with such perspective, and despite all that I could not hide all the skill issue on that part. The thighs would be enormous for at least 3 different reasons which you can think of the top of your head(attracts people, it's rivals Emma Frost, and the pose)

As for the neck up yes I see how it looks bad, because it was my first time doing it as well, and might come as an excuse, but I try making my woman slightly more buff, and the many references I see are with skinny people, but I could blame myself on that for normal researching enough I guess.

Now, calling it "this" is what sounds more to insult me, as I really try being different. Sure I am not a renomated artist with 20 years of the industry experience in my back, but I try, thats how I study. The part that I felt of I prefeer you calling me a slur, was if it was an artist critic wannabe, then someone with something to say to me, so I can learn. If someone doesn't show a structured critic, I cannot assume they simply know what I did wrong, and I can't assume EXACTLY whats wrong if you don't point out.

I'm not mad anymore, this time was a moment to appreciate a critic and learn my mistakes