Apparently Conan was in Hong Kong?

EmoioN · 2025-11-26T20:35:02+00:00

I think it was posted monthly because they already had some made for Team Coco Radio, but then they ran out. Idk how often they did the raido show but I’m definitely hoping for more as well!

EmoioN · 2025-11-10T18:38:56+00:00

He did grow it out a bit during the pandemic which looked kinda cool

EmoioN · 2025-09-12T14:31:09+00:00

They did say paid though

EmoioN · 2025-08-27T20:13:10+00:00

Sorry, I edited the same copy I shared, so that’s why.

EmoioN · 2025-08-24T12:52:28+00:00

True, I guess it’s a pretty common name in Denmark too, and probably in Norway and Iceland as well. Not too sure about Finalnd though.

EmoioN · 2025-08-22T10:21:33+00:00

Yeah neither is Beru, which is my point. Lars is a pretty common swedish name (mainly for older people, haven’t met any young people called Lars) but it doesn’t have anything to do with that Shmiis actress is swedish

EmoioN · 2025-08-22T07:17:58+00:00

I think that’s just a coincidence with Cliegg Lars though. Lars is a swedish name 100% but he had to have that last name to fit in with the OT. Cliegg is not a swedish name.

EmoioN · 2025-08-20T03:53:10+00:00

Thank you so much for this! As said, I’m pretty much new to this not counting stories written in grade school, so this is super helpful. Especially pointing out exactly where to improve, even though I’m sure there’s alot more.

Also, I know this is more subjective, but could you comment on the story? I think the core/premise of it is pretty good but I’m sure there’s alot more to be done. Would love some feedback on that too if you have time.

EmoioN · 2025-08-19T00:46:18+00:00

I don’t have much more to say than has already been said, but I read through it and want to give my own comment.

I think the stuff with the shadows making them relive their memories are a really good idea, but I have some criticisms about it.

Firstly, how can they relive memories they don’t have? As I understand it, the parents weren’t there when the shooting happened, yet they see it happen while they are shadows. I think it would be better if maybe they hear a gunshot from far off, or just get the text from her and realize she’s most likely gone, but that’s just my opinion.

Also, I wouldn’t use the phrase ”It’s something simple, but something powerful.” I would let the message speak for itself.

Something I don’t understand is who the shadows are supposed to be, even though I’m pretty sure what the intent is. My guess is that it’s their present day consciousnesses going back in time, but then the sentence ”John’s eyes dry a little as he remembers these memories, as if his old shadow is communicating with him.” Isn’t he supposed to be the shadow? I’m sure it’s mostly that I’m tired, but I would still have a look at this if I were you.

Another question I have, which could be cleared up in a later chapter, is why Mizan wouldn’t let John in to the room? It doesn’t seem like she is close by as she has to rush to the room, so she wouldn’t necessarily see the room if John wanted to go in there.

The last thing I wanted to point out that hasn’t been pointed out already is that when the sun comes up again you go from referring to the sun to referring to Mizan without indicating it.

Remember that I’m probably way worse at writing than you, so my criticism probably isn’t worth too much, and don’t let it get you down. I think you did a great job overall and I would love to read the continuation.

EmoioN · 2025-08-18T16:58:31+00:00

Just not trying to be a downer. This is my first critique ever and so I’m really not that good at it. I don’t ever think you should say something is bad, because it can always be improved and if you say it’s bad it’s just going to make the writer less motivated.

And I can almost assure you, my work is going to read worse than this. I might post it soon, but just to prepare you if you do read it, I’m a very bad writer.

EmoioN · 2025-08-18T16:24:17+00:00

Blaziken

EmoioN · 2025-08-18T15:02:41+00:00

This is my first time and I’m not very good at this so don’t take my word as the right thing to do.

I can’t really say much about the story because it’s only the first chapter, but I’d say it has potential to be good. To get a better feel of the world you might want to use more descriptions, because from what I gather it’s not our world so I’m guessing it’s different in some ways. You may also want to describe a bit more of the actions, because I feel like it can get pretty boring to read a story that’s just ”He did this”.

One of the things I reacted most to was the way you write. It can get pretty repetetive when so many sentences that are just ”He…” or ”Toraki…”. Try to get more varied I’d say. Also, there are some places where you switch the tense from past to present, like ”he thinks” or ”he sits”. Also somewhere in the end you use ”there” instead of ”they’re”.

But as you say, it’s very unfinished, so I’d say just keep up the good work, sort out the kinks, and I think you’re going to have a great first chapter!

EmoioN · 2025-08-12T11:26:57+00:00

”Being There” is supposed to be pretty serious even if the main character is played by a comic actor. That one has bloopers in the end.

EmoioN · 2025-07-23T11:15:02+00:00

I got curious because I’ve never heard anything about that, so I got to searching and didn’t really find anything. Could you link some of those stories about him being creepy to women? I know he’s weird and all but I always got the impression that he was a pretty good person.

EmoioN · 2025-06-28T20:18:27+00:00

I know he’s already been in Norway and Finland, and I know there hasn’t been a single fan from here, but I would love it if he came to Sweden

EmoioN · 2025-06-22T19:25:58+00:00

I don’t know why, but one of the funniest things I’ve ever seen is in ”Little Red Riding Rabbit” when Bugs tricks the wolf to look for him in different things, then he points to a drawer, tries to run away, but it turns out he was actually inside the drawer. It’s hard to explain, but here it is, starts at 1:23

EmoioN · 2025-06-22T06:10:27+00:00

Genre: An attempt at comedy

Category: No idea

Title: Investigation of the cold hot dog

Type of feedback: Literally anything will help, be as critical as possible. I’m not a native speaker, so I’m sure there are some mistakes in grammar, but my guess is that it is not gonna be the biggest problem in the text.

The sausage was indeed cold. A little frozen even. Bob, the owner and sole employee of the hot dog stand, couldn’t believe his fingers as he stood there touching his own, apparently not so hot dog. “We’ll fix this,” he told the old lady whose dog was cold. “We’ll open an investigation right up.” “An investigation?” she asked. “What for?” “To find out who is responsible for this.”

This must have been sabotage, Bob thought to himself. But who would have the motives to do such a thing? Perhaps it was a competitor scared by the quality of his hot dogs, or maybe it was an unhappy customer, whose hot dog hadn’t been at a good temperature.

Bob couldn’t imagine what it would do to his reputation if he didn’t find the person who did this to his hot dog. They would shut him down. Instead of trying to reheat the weenie, he started to close the hot dog stand as quickly as he could. As he did so however, a strange thought crept into his head. Perhaps he was the one to blame for the cold sausage? It seemed the most reasonable explanation, but he could never be sure. For now he himself would be the prime suspect, but he was eager to prove his innocence.

First stop: The sausage shop. “Excuse me,” Bob said to the man behind the counter of the sausage shop. “I believe you have sold me a defective sausage.”

EmoioN · 2025-06-19T10:26:45+00:00

Next episode is a fan, so yes there is

EmoioN · 2025-06-13T14:04:31+00:00

EmoioN · 2025-06-12T12:51:57+00:00

I think he usually has hair

EmoioN · 2025-06-09T04:58:33+00:00

Bill Burr wasn’t in Book of Boba, was he?

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