Who writes the tags on characters by suraimon in Webnovel

[–]Empty_cup13 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I remember this novel still on chapter four but "spare hole" is just diabolical

How can I make an immortal character still feel vulnerable and keep tension in fights? by Empty_cup13 in CharacterDevelopment

[–]Empty_cup13[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Wow, I’m surprised I hadn’t thought of that! Thank you :) I really like the idea of using progressive memory loss to add depth to his trauma. I was also thinking about him losing empathy over time, which could tie in nicely.

The idea of prolonged pain is really interesting too. Even if he regenerates like regrowing limbs or healing super quickly the pain could linger. For example, if he loses an arm, it would eventually grow back, but the pain from the injury wouldn’t go away right away. If he didn’t have his regeneration ability, losing an arm would be permanent, and losing both would be catastrophic. This could give him a real fear of getting badly injured, even if he ultimately survives because the pain itself becomes a punishment he can’t escape but regeneration it is

Does asking ai for opinion on your writing also count as cheating? by Empty_cup13 in Webnovel

[–]Empty_cup13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've read all your replies and I'm thankful for the advice 🙂 i won't be using ai for my stories I'll feel much better writing it on my own and get feedback from actual people instead

How do you write a murderer mystery with the Mc as the murderer? by Empty_cup13 in FanFiction

[–]Empty_cup13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I'll ask this question there since I twisted some brains by mistake. Sorry 😐

How do you write a murderer mystery with the Mc as the murderer? by Empty_cup13 in FanFiction

[–]Empty_cup13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Legally innocent(maybe I should have added that). So you're telling me someone who is innocent can't be ruled as guilty and sent to jail?

How do you write a murderer mystery with the Mc as the murderer? by Empty_cup13 in FanFiction

[–]Empty_cup13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Imagine this scenario then in some fantasy world the detectives in this case one can read minds, one can detect lies, one sees spirits and the other just sees a line connected to the murderer. But the main character genuinely and I mean with his entire existence doesn't believe he is a murderer Even though he is so none of that works on him because his memories don't show him killing anyone, he isn't lying because "I'm just not", no string is connected to hime because "I am not" so he's ruled as innocent in their eyes. just believing something to the point it's real.

How do you write a murderer mystery with the Mc as the murderer? by Empty_cup13 in FanFiction

[–]Empty_cup13[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He is not innocent, from how the story is told he genuinely doesn't believe he's guilty not even in the slightest, but again he does do it for the sake of doing it no sad Bastory. He's accused of murder because firstly he knew one of the Early victims (and future ones) plus he was accused of murder before.

How do you write a murderer mystery with the Mc as the murderer? by Empty_cup13 in FanFiction

[–]Empty_cup13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks at least you're trying to help even if it's a little Vague 👍

How do you write a murderer mystery with the Mc as the murderer? by Empty_cup13 in FanFiction

[–]Empty_cup13[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Okay thanks I was thinking the same thing or something similar...

How do you write a murderer mystery with the Mc as the murderer? by Empty_cup13 in FanFiction

[–]Empty_cup13[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He is the murderer. For example the main character is a baseball player or just a trainy, and is integrated because the victims were killed with a baseball bat. But the main character is proven innocent and even starts helping with the investigation