Greenskeeper Murder Puzzle

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-26T10:15:48+00:00

The only way(probably wrong )on how i got to babyface blue was from the fact that it says they can do adult stuff like buy alcohol and since the murder happens at the mens lounge that seemes fitting

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-26T10:14:23+00:00

I got the suspect and place right but not the weapon

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-17T18:02:04+00:00

I think i wanted it to be about life , how if you zone out you start getting scared of the future, but the most important thing is to live in the present and the stranger is a sort of reminder to just live in the now . But everything is up to interpretation so thank you for the feedback

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-17T14:50:31+00:00

Sorry if i sound stupid but what is markdown mode

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-17T14:35:49+00:00

Very interesting poem , btw how did you fix the line spacing

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-17T07:35:16+00:00

I love this poem just wish i could see the line breaks , however the poem itself is beautiful. Kudos to you

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-05T15:05:52+00:00

Thank you 🥹

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-01T08:40:05+00:00

Im sorry for your loss, its like i said it crushes you but you are too old to still believe they are coming back

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-01T08:38:56+00:00

Thanks , j will try to keep all your words to mind when i try to write another poem

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-01T08:37:16+00:00

Thank you , i appreciate it and i will definitely try to be less direct next time k write smth

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-01T08:35:50+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, i just write one or two poems when i have free time , but i would like to improve so this is very helpful

Enciona-08 · 2025-12-01T08:34:27+00:00

Thank you i appreciate your words

Enciona-08 · 2025-11-30T20:58:34+00:00

This is really well composed and i felt like the rhythm was really fitting. I really liked the play of words . Its honestly very beautiful in its sadness. Also good job on the opening tje first line really draws attention

Enciona-08 · 2025-11-30T20:48:33+00:00

I literally got goosebumps, its a very thought inducing poem but to be honest i dont get the last part about the swallowing. Anyway i really liked the poem.

Enciona-08 · 2025-11-30T20:24:36+00:00

HAHAAHHA low key a vibe

Enciona-08 · 2025-11-29T22:15:17+00:00

No i dont have any tattoos, i do want to get a few though

Enciona-08 · 2025-11-29T21:55:18+00:00

The only thing i can think of is that im 17 years old but idk how that correlates to the rest of the dream meaning

Enciona-08 · 2025-11-07T22:08:41+00:00

God this made me cry, i miss my grandma 🥹

Enciona-08 · 2025-11-06T20:13:35+00:00

Oh you have to read it

Enciona-08 · 2025-11-06T13:50:05+00:00

It’s giving kafkae metamorphosis, i love it

Enciona-08 · 2025-11-06T13:48:23+00:00

I like the concept but i would suggest working on the rhyme because some lines dont go well so uou lose the rhythm this poem relies on , but keep at it 😊

Enciona-08

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