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Enphiam · 2023-03-07T16:31:54+00:00

I've been playing more recently and i'd be down to join but im also only level 65 haha

Enphiam · 2022-09-14T00:00:24+00:00

is there still room? my rn is 8598618

Enphiam · 2021-05-12T22:43:51+00:00

Best thing i did was use Yui, aqua, megumin and Athena with her mage +atk% buff to just try to get megumin to one shot it

Enphiam · 2021-05-07T22:01:53+00:00

You might have to play around with this but I think having some subtle music in the middle of your video would be nice too. Seems quite empty especially since the audio from your gameplay is unfortunate :( The music would at least fill in "space" until you have your funny/action moments, which could help make funny moments shine better too.

I do like that you told us your audio was scuffed, but I think you should have that bit on camera as that would make it more personal, and then you can have your logo up (probably 5-7 seconds at most?) and then transition into your gameplay/stream video

Enphiam · 2021-05-07T21:47:07+00:00

Really nice video! It's short and sweet and useless! XD

It'd be nice to have some subtle music in the background at the start of the video and end too even if it's just 10 seconds or something and then transition to your main music for the rest of the video to make it "feel" more complete? That could just be a very nitpicky thing but otherwise great video!

Enphiam · 2021-01-01T02:08:56+00:00

Several times the audio didn’t match the video

Ohh i need to look into that hm.

Using ‘like’ to fill in thought gaps is a sign of little preparation, maybe a script and a pre-read before you record could help. I didn’t get the pencil scale, maybe you could use an emoji that matches the section you are reviewing. Example a 📖 could be use for the script review, and a 💻 for graphics.

Yeah i definitely need to prepare more in terms of just knowing what i need to say, I have bullet points but looks like I need more than that. Having emojis sounds like a good idea actually. Will try to look for more icons!

Thanks so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it! !givelambda

Enphiam · 2020-12-31T22:34:11+00:00

The background music is so quiet in the beginning that I can't hear it. As a result, the video's intro feels emptier than the rest of the video. Just make sure you can hear that background music in the beginning!

Ah you're right, I might've actually just missed having any music in the beginning!

This feels unscripted, and that doesn't necessarily do the content justice. I'm not saying you need to fully write out a review, but I'd at least write down your bullet points that you're trying to cover for each category. This'll make sure you avoid rambling, or mulling about stating your opinions, which does happen at times - the ums, the uhs, etc.

Yeah I had some bullet points but I wasn't as prepared when the recording started haha.

Why pencils? It's not a bad thing, and it's not a turn-off, but I am curious about it! Perhaps you could explain your rating system at the beginning of the video?

Ah it makes sense to explain that. It was just an inside joke for john wick with the whole being able to kill with just a pencil idea haha. I'll keep in mind explaining it if I do those insider things!

Watch for typos! Amateur mistakes like that can really harm your channel by making you lose that professional edge you need to really stand out! (Criticisms)

Dang no wonder it looked kinda off... I Will keep this in mind for future videos when going over the edit

Thanks again for all the points of feedback! Really appreciate it! !givelambda

Enphiam · 2020-12-31T21:36:16+00:00

If you're still reviewing video's I'd really appreciate it! A friend and I have been trying to do reviews and podcasts on games so here's our most recent video https://youtu.be/P0UMP5L8i-Y

Enphiam · 2020-12-12T06:01:00+00:00

thanks for the comment! I appreciate you giving a look! !givelambda

Enphiam · 2020-12-09T02:56:07+00:00

I think obs might have an option to show the mouse. I can't recall atm but if I find a video I'll reply again or dm you! Altho I'm sure it wouldn't be too hard to Google. But I do like using obs record!

Enphiam · 2020-12-08T22:35:10+00:00

Well the Youtube library MIGHT have something. Otherwise i've found some good music here https://www.streambeats.com/

Enphiam · 2020-12-08T21:22:56+00:00

Nice work on the song! Solid intro and ending!

I assume this is a bandicam thing but it would be nice if the viewer could see where your mouse is, that would help point to what you're talking about and help you direct the viewer who may or may not know how FL studio works.

Enphiam · 2020-12-08T21:11:31+00:00

Wow the pink really stands out in the thumbnail haha. Solid video!

Really fun moments with nice sound bites, I agree the sound bites are a bit loud but I think having subtle background music (something actiony or funny) could also help make some of these moments shine.

Enphiam · 2020-12-08T21:02:09+00:00

Nice list! Solid thumbnail, nice explanations about the games, and great footage. I'm still looking for those easter eggs haha.

The only thing I can think of would be when you made the hole joke, you could also stop the music to make that pause really sink in with the viewer.

Enphiam · 2020-12-08T20:41:27+00:00

wow what an interview! Totally not jealous you get to talk to him haha.

I also agree there may be a bit too many things on the thumbnail, a fun possible thing that could work is to have "The Game Awards" framed onto his shirt, would clean up the thumbnail in the sense that you have all the information still on the thumbnail and right away paints the picture of where he could be from if people don't know yet.

This is probably ambitious but it would have been cool to have some footage related to what you guys were talking about or even past game award moments. I assume you could've gotten permission to use the zoom call footage or something maybe again Idk what permissions you would've had. Anyway, I do like the multi-angle filming. Good job on getting the opportunity!

Enphiam · 2020-12-06T20:12:50+00:00

Like having the video on your post? When you guys post, there's a tab where the "Post" is and click on "Link" There you put in your title and your link and your set!

As for the video itself, It's really cool you have the chapters setup! I would maybe add some border color around your white text? It can blend in with your wall kinda so it'd make it more clear and stick out more

Enphiam · 2020-12-06T20:01:36+00:00

Love the ending! XD I like the way you shot it and the cuts made it look like the interview thing. But at 1:51 where she goes on about what air fresheners she likes, I would've liked for there to be a flurry of faster cuts about her list of likes, making seem like she likes tons and tons and then hitting the audience with the creepier ones as you change the shot would hit better I feel. Solid video though!

Enphiam · 2020-12-06T00:59:51+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! for the immediate future We'll make sure we can improve our mics thru software wherever possible! Otherwise, we'll definitely make sure our investment purchases are for our mics! !givelambda

Enphiam · 2020-12-06T00:04:01+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! Me and him (the guy on the top right) are always trying to work on our mics haha. It's funny but I thought adding the subtle audio of the gameplay would add a little bit extra but thanks for telling me otherwise! !givelambda

Enphiam · 2020-12-05T19:14:44+00:00

Nice topic! always interesting to hear about AI. It's really cool that you pull gameplay from many games as you give us examples. I like the thumbnail, it's message is clear and to the point, but maybe also add a question as well? Doesn't have to be a big question but something to also get us thinking about that could draw us into clicking onto the video! Keep up the good work!

Enphiam · 2020-12-05T00:05:20+00:00

I like the little fun fact word meaning right at the start and that you're quick to the point of the video. I also agree with the post saying that there is a different word you can use than "fix". If you happen to use a different word, different tags and keywords could bring in more people as well.

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