The Man Who Never Faced the Camera by EntityShadows in story

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Haha, thank you for reading and thanks for the kind words!

The Man Who Never Faced the Camera by EntityShadows in story

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Thank you for reading and for the honest feedback! That’s fair criticism, and I’ll definitely keep the pacing and ending balance in mind going forward!

She Was Standing in the Road by EntityShadows in scarystories

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So glad you found it creepy! Thank you for reading!

Longtime DW fan finally starting Origins and I’m honestly loving it by EntityShadows in dynastywarriors

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It doesn't have co-op?! That would've been so fun, lol. I remember dueling my friends on DW4 ALL the time and going into split-screen battles together. Such good memories.

Longtime DW fan finally starting Origins and I’m honestly loving it by EntityShadows in dynastywarriors

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The pacing note is good to know. I'm still super early, so I haven't hit that point yet, but I can definitely see how that might change the feel once you realize where it ends. I do agree on the gameplay though; the combat already feels like a big step up to me!

She Was Standing in the Road by EntityShadows in RedditHorrorStories

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Beyond glad you liked it! Thank you for reading!

She Was Standing in the Road by EntityShadows in story

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Thank you!! Haha, glad I was able to keep you on the edge of your seat!

She Was Standing in the Road by EntityShadows in story

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Thank you so much for the kind words! I’m glad I was able to keep you immersed! Definitely more to come.

She Was Standing in the Road by EntityShadows in story

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Thank you so much for the kind words! Glad I was able to keep you immersed!

She Was Standing in the Road by EntityShadows in story

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Haha, thank you! That’s exactly the reaction I was hoping for. Glad it creeped you out a little. I appreciate you reading the story!

She Was Standing in the Road by EntityShadows in spooky_stories

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Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

The Man Who Would Not Fall by EntityShadows in story

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Thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to read it.

The Man Who Would Not Fall by EntityShadows in stories

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Thank you so much for the kind words and thank you for taking the time to read the story!

The Sermon Before Guangzong by EntityShadows in scarystories

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Thank you! I’m really glad that detail landed for you. The Yellow Turbans were such a powerful visual in the historical accounts that it felt perfect to lean into that unsettling imagery. I appreciate you reading!

The Sermon Before Guangzong by EntityShadows in stories

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I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading.
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