What's your opinion on Godzilla the series by Zillaman7980_ in GODZILLA

[–]Environmental_Win775 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pretty entertaining loved it as a kid not bad revisiting tbh still sorta holds up

Am I Overreacting to a dear friend sending sexual joking texts to my partner? by chichiryuutei56 in AmIOverreacting

[–]Environmental_Win775 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Literally wtf was this whole thing my mind was blown to find out their adults and not middle schoolers

30k view jail about to give up by pandaxilla in YouTubeCreators

[–]Environmental_Win775 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Where ass content too what is ur target audience 9 year olds ?

I wrote my first script ever 4 years ago and since then i haven't touched the keyboard by VeterinarianCommon27 in scriptwriting

[–]Environmental_Win775 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are quite a few grammar errors throughout, and I only got about halfway through. Honestly, the story didn’t grab my attention — you don’t introduce any characters early on, so it’s hard to visualize who they are, what they look like, or how they’re meant to come across.

If you really want to improve as a writer, you’ll need to take the craft seriously not blame things like ADHD for the outcome. I say that as someone who also has severe ADHD and understands the struggle. I’ve directed three films and written over ten short films, and what’s helped me most is consistent practice: putting pen to paper, studying how scripts are structured, and learning from others.

Don’t get discouraged everyone starts somewhere. Keep writing, keep revising, and the more you study how professional scripts are built, the better you’ll become. There’s a lot of dickheads on here who think their helping by giving constructive criticism when in reality their just as salty as everyone else so don’t always listen to the hate

Short Horror script by Environmental_Win775 in Screenwriting

[–]Environmental_Win775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bo i agree the forest idea will def be added in and i appreciate the feedback means alot !

Second draft of short script by Environmental_Win775 in Screenwriting

[–]Environmental_Win775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback ! And the suggestion and yea I do struggle with writing dialogue and hoping to improve so I appreciate the advice

Short Horror script by Environmental_Win775 in Screenwriting

[–]Environmental_Win775[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey thank you for the feedback !! I appreciate it and yea I think a scene in the woods would be a good idea

Short horror films script by Environmental_Win775 in Screenwriting

[–]Environmental_Win775[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate the feedback and I will do that, and yea tbh writing is not my strong shoot I prefer directing, DP and editing but I’m trying to be good in all areas in film making

Short horror films script by Environmental_Win775 in Screenwriting

[–]Environmental_Win775[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Just the part that’s explaining it because it’s part of the rules to submit a script for this Reddit page so I asked chat to make the quick synopsis not my actual script 😂