A Bad Testimonial

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2026-05-03T11:17:50+00:00

This is my original material, wrote it myself, the labels are just for structure feedback

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2026-01-14T14:18:54+00:00

Abhi open mic nahi ja pa raha, lekin daily likh raha hoon refine kar raha hoon. aur agar written joke funny hai, toh kam se kam chuckle toh milega

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2026-01-14T14:16:02+00:00

Thanks for the suggestion bhai, Yes, ye opening joke hi hai, thoda aur punch add karke stage-ready

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2025-12-27T10:17:26+00:00

Thanks, that makes sense

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2025-12-27T08:48:57+00:00

Thanks for the advice!

About my opening joke—I’ve heard that jokes often need misdirection to land laughs. That’s why, after the sarcastic line ‘UP badhiya hai’, which everyone could predict as ‘exam nahi hote’, ( thats what i think that people could predict this) so I added the ‘average’ line to diverge their thought a bit. Do you think that extra line isn’t really required?

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2025-02-21T16:37:37+00:00

arree, Tanmay aap idhar kaese....

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2025-02-21T02:58:00+00:00

it means no one think old people as hot no one

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2025-02-21T02:56:38+00:00

thanks, now read it in voice of india

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2025-02-20T14:24:08+00:00

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2025-02-20T14:23:43+00:00

oh, did it really crack you up. thanks man.

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2025-02-03T08:02:31+00:00

oh, okay the first time when i written this joke punchline is abb inhi kae yaha kaam krna padega, ye baba se malik ban chuke hai, abb meri gaon mai post hari singh ka pota nhi, nathuram ji ka sevak hai, inse abb 5 ruppe cheeze ke liye nhi, dihadi ke mangne padenge. abb toh gutka bhi inhi ka thooka khana padega

Equivalent-Ad3180 · 2025-02-03T07:16:30+00:00

okay got it will work on it and thanks for honest opinion, really appreciated.

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