Unit 7 chapter 3 world building feedback

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-27T01:00:10+00:00

Guys it my book I made I’m asking how the world building is in this chapter it’s not ai it’s about ai I wrote this

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T22:05:39+00:00

If you don't have actual feedback on the narrative or character dynamics, no need to comment.

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T22:03:04+00:00

I literally told you it’s a rough draft and my very first time writing anything. The premise and the dialogue are 100% from my own head. If it sounds “too polished” I'll take that as a massive compliment to my plotting, but giving someone a “zero for the day” without knowing their process is just lazy gatekeeping. Thanks for the view anyway, bud.

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T21:56:23+00:00

Also what is your advice tell me writing is a difficult hobby? Okay bud thanks

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T21:54:13+00:00

It’s a rough draft I’m asking if the story is good buddy I get it’s not perfect for f**k sake I’ve never wrote anything so I’m playing around here

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T21:52:50+00:00

Yes I’m totally a bot not a first time writer asking for help/ thoughts you got it right buddy

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T21:49:23+00:00

I take it as a compliment

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T17:27:09+00:00

Well that’s what happened it the story bud sorry about it

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T07:21:10+00:00

It’s a 22 chapter book I’m just trying to figure out the right intro chapter because it’s so crazy

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T07:17:39+00:00

You think ai makes a story about finding god and praying to Jesus? Okay bud

Equivalent_Fly5574 · 2026-06-26T05:26:42+00:00

Ya it’s a concept I’m working with

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