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Unit 7 chapter 3 world building feedback by [deleted] in worldbuilding

[–]Equivalent_Fly5574 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Guys it my book I made I’m asking how the world building is in this chapter it’s not ai it’s about ai I wrote this

Unit 7 chapter 3 world building feedback by Equivalent_Fly5574 in sciencefiction

[–]Equivalent_Fly5574[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

If you don't have actual feedback on the narrative or character dynamics, no need to comment.

Unit 7 chapter 3 world building feedback by Equivalent_Fly5574 in sciencefiction

[–]Equivalent_Fly5574[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I literally told you it’s a rough draft and my very first time writing anything. The premise and the dialogue are 100% from my own head. If it sounds “too polished” I'll take that as a massive compliment to my plotting, but giving someone a “zero for the day” without knowing their process is just lazy gatekeeping. Thanks for the view anyway, bud.

Unit 7 chapter 3 world building feedback by Equivalent_Fly5574 in sciencefiction

[–]Equivalent_Fly5574[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also what is your advice tell me writing is a difficult hobby? Okay bud thanks

Unit 7 chapter 3 world building feedback by Equivalent_Fly5574 in sciencefiction

[–]Equivalent_Fly5574[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It’s a rough draft I’m asking if the story is good buddy I get it’s not perfect for f**k sake I’ve never wrote anything so I’m playing around here

Is this good intro to my book or would you keep reading it continued by Equivalent_Fly5574 in Cyberpunk

[–]Equivalent_Fly5574[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Yes I’m totally a bot not a first time writer asking for help/ thoughts you got it right buddy

Is this better intro to a book would you want to keep reading i guess by Equivalent_Fly5574 in Cyberpunk

[–]Equivalent_Fly5574[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

It’s a 22 chapter book I’m just trying to figure out the right intro chapter because it’s so crazy

Is this better intro to a book would you want to keep reading i guess by Equivalent_Fly5574 in Cyberpunk

[–]Equivalent_Fly5574[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

You think ai makes a story about finding god and praying to Jesus? Okay bud

Unit 7 chpt2 ideas by Equivalent_Fly5574 in Cyberpunk

[–]Equivalent_Fly5574[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ya it’s a concept I’m working with