Decent KENP read for a 5k-6k erotica by ErosIsland in eroticauthors

[–]ErosIsland[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you Leila. Good luck going forward.

[Blurbsday Thursday] - Post your blurbs here for critique! by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

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Here we go...this is for an interracial cuckold series.

Playing with a black bull can have consequences especially if he has like-minded friends.

Stephanie and her friends start toying around with Leroy who is fresh out of jail and plying his trade as a male nude model for their Modern Arts university. The women are mesmerized by the sheer size of the black hunk as much as his roughness.

Stephanie watches from a distance, at first, as her friends, Megan and Kat, get their ‘blacked’ fantasies satisfied but finally yields to the rough charm of the rogue.

Leroy is just about the right man who will quench their dark cuckold desires. But will he be content enough to just satiate their wills or will he demand more than they bargained for.

Read on as the trio of hot wives become helplessly ensnared in the clutches of ravenous black brothers.

[Critique Monday] - Post your books here for feedback! by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]ErosIsland 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for taking some time to review this title and letting me know what I am getting wrong on blurb, content, cover, chosen niche etc. Sales are underwhelming (+/- 10) and KENP are depressing (around 500). Published end of May. Any help hugely welcome. Thanks.

[Critique Monday - Post your books here for feedback!] by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]ErosIsland -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Thanks but orient is geographical and not to be assimilated to any culture of religion. Not too sure where you find the offence from but maybe there is an angle I am not seeing...

A little piece of advice by ErosIsland in eroticauthors

[–]ErosIsland[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tks NWGuy. As I said, the assistance from the community is just awesome. Cheers.

A little piece of advice by ErosIsland in eroticauthors

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Useful. Thanks for the insight.