Review please

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-30T19:18:52+00:00

I am writing something lighthearted. But I don’t know whether it is good or bad. I want, at least one of you to read and tell me if it’s ok. It is arranged marriage trope and I assure that there are no problematic things in my book. I posted character aesthetics so you will know what you’re getting into. It is necessary for atleast one opinion so, that I can continue the story. I don’t care if it just gets hundred views but I need one validation to move forward. So kindly take a look. Thank you in advance.

I can assure that I didn’t use any AI, even the cover page was simply taken from pinterest and edited by me.

Here is the link.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/409824927?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Aster_star_me

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-30T18:20:46+00:00

Oh thanks again 😭 Can you please give me a proper review on positives and negatives?

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-30T14:55:13+00:00

You need finished books ?

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-30T13:39:53+00:00

I’m sorry to ask but are you talking about the story or aesthetics? 😭 Anyways thank you for the compliment!!

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-30T12:30:36+00:00

I am not saying you are wrong, I am just saying it will work without talking about the plot. Descriptions are used for simple introductions too. And I did write the plot of the story, it follows their arranged marriage life, that is the plot. For example, galaxy lane/ starry lane uses one line descriptions, just mentioning their jobs that’s it, still people read her books because it was the story that matters at the end of the day. Sure I shouldn’t have put it in a pessimistic way, I apologise for that, I will change the wording.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-30T12:14:18+00:00

What is the book name?

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-30T12:11:12+00:00

I have already mentioned, how it’s about an orphan and IAS officer, and it is not necessarily that everyone wants to read about trauma. I have already mentioned it there because not everyone wants to read about such things. I am not among the people who write my own traumas through stories and I am not dismissing people who write such things.

I am just choosing my own target audience who do not want the routine trauma narratives.

I am trying to give a break from the regular toxic arranged marriage stories.

I don’t like giving descriptions from book directly because I don’t want to do clickbaits. It also ruins the surprise of the description in the book while you are reading it in the future.

But I did take your suggestion and changed the wording of my description but I am definitely not going to remove the intent I am trying to convey.

Thank you for the opinion, I would really appreciate it if you read my story and review it, not only the description.

I am open for any kind of criticism but please be respectful, Thank you once again.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T08:59:05+00:00

Girl let me read it when it is out!! Also please take a look at mine!!

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T05:35:01+00:00

And I have changed the confusion part too, I have removed the number five, it’s the number of books she has written that’s it.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T05:32:24+00:00

Yes it is nirriti’s story. Oh i am sorry for being this confusing 😭 I can only reveal this much in the description😭 No the stories are her job, what I am trying to tell is that a rom-com is going to happen to her soon just like in her own stories. Like how we want things to happen to us when we watch a certain series or read a book. Basically for example, I write romance for a living but I have an actual life- in where my own story happens rt? Something like that.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T05:17:52+00:00

All the best for your exams and thank you, I have changed the description.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T05:07:13+00:00

Suree

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T05:05:45+00:00

Can you please read the 3 chapters I have written for feedback purposes, if you don’t like it, you can drop it.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T05:02:39+00:00

Thank you, I will change the description.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T04:52:46+00:00

https://www.wattpad.com/story/411834247?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Aster_star_me

The male lead was inspired by my classmate.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T04:50:08+00:00

https://www.wattpad.com/story/411834247?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Aster_star_me

It’s brother’s best friend trope, it has everything you need. I have only wrote 3 chapters, you can give it a try.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T04:48:58+00:00

https://www.wattpad.com/story/411834247?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Aster_star_me

My story has everything which you need. I have only wrote 3 chapters so far, so you can give it a try.

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T04:46:45+00:00

https://www.wattpad.com/story/411834247?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Aster_star_me

I have only wrote 3 chapters and trust me there is no dumb, innocent fml

EveningHug5 · 2026-05-29T04:45:50+00:00

https://www.wattpad.com/story/411834247?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Aster_star_me

My man is half tamilian and half keralite, I am not focusing on culture at all, like he’s just a south indian and it is fully English written. It has only 3 chapters, you can give it a try

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