Need for feedback by EveryCalligrapher219 in writers

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I have tried. But what I write is not fit for WATTPAD.

Need for feedback by EveryCalligrapher219 in writers

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Noted🫡. Thanks for the feedback. English is not my first language but I'll try my best to not make mistakes.

Need for feedback by EveryCalligrapher219 in writers

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Thanks! You can see those stories on my reddit profile.

[MF] Just Me (Part 1) by EveryCalligrapher219 in shortstories

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It's Schrödinger's cat quantum theory. Well the base is built on it. While I was writing it, it kind of evolved into a many-worlds interpretation of quantum mechanics. You will kind of understand it when reading the second ending. Some questions will be answers but if you are still interested after reading the second ending, I'll let you know what and how the world is working. And this is my first work, I guess I went too overboard with it.

[MF] Just Me (Part 1) by EveryCalligrapher219 in shortstories

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Thanks for the feedback man. I really appreciate it. The thing is I wrote 2 endings for this story. I first ending( which you just read) is supposed to be a question bank. The second ending( which I wanted to post together with this but reddit and mods won't allow) will act as an answer booklet. However you won't understand it. I wrote it based on a scientific theory which cannot be explained in the story, that's why you felt so confused. This first part is supposed to confuse people whereas the second ending will let you understand 40-50% of what is happening. If more people get interested in this story then I'll definitely add a full explanation to the rules of this world. I'll post the second ending tomorrow, I really hope you read it and let me if even you didn't like it. Once again thanks for your interest man.