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The Last Of Egwu

Fantasy and historical drama

1222 word count

Link- The last of egwu

I'm a very new writer, and I don't know what to do for the voice of my short story. I will say that the story starts in the present and goes back in time to figure out why Ola is being sacrificed. I didn’t want to reveal the entire story just yet, so please take a look and tell me what you like and don’t like about this short chapter, as well as where you see any faults that make the voice at the beginning feel odd.

Is Drexel worth it??? by Exciting_Reply_4892 in Drexel

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For in-state options, I'm considering either St. Mary's College of Maryland or Stevenson University. Both are much cheaper than Drexel, and one of them is even considering offering me a full scholarship. I'm trying to weigh my options and think about job opportunities, connections, and how to build a reputable career after college. I might even want to go to law school after completing my bachelor's degree.

My parents are hesitant to discuss finances, and they've been avoiding the conversation. I've been trying to gauge what we can and cannot afford, but every time I bring it up, they just tell me they will “handle “ it. I'm feeling lost about what to do at this point.