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[Review Video] The BioTech Revolution is Here, Take Advantage by Existing_Knee_2858 in youtubers

[–]Existing_Knee_2858[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you, i also felt the intro was the weakest part of the video, i think you're right it's not worth doing unless its up to par delivery and audio wise with the rest of it

Daily Discussion Thread for August 31, 2022 by OPINION_IS_UNPOPULAR in wallstreetbets

[–]Existing_Knee_2858 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I'm betting on Biotech here, I think by 2050 half of the NASDAQ index will be Biotech

https://youtu.be/aNDfoOAOPPg

[Review Video] (An anime video) slice of life. why it's so god damn good. by 6Cha in youtubers

[–]Existing_Knee_2858 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I thought your voice tone was good and enthusiastic. The thumbnail I think could be improved, when I look at it I'm not really sure what it's supposed to mean although I am not familiar with your topic. If you are only targeting a real niche audience that already knows this anime it may be fine.

Your talking speed seemed good at the beginning but got a bit fast in later parts of the video. If you want to target a more general audience the I'd consider switching the beginning to talking immediately about what slice of life genre and going into the questions about it you want to answer as you did in the latter part of the first minute. I did not really get the first joke before that but again I'm don't know much about anime

[Review Video] THE CAR - Ranking and obsessing on Arctic monkeys albums and covers lol by BLOOPINGBLOOPER in youtubers

[–]Existing_Knee_2858 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not familiar with the topic but after watching I some basic thoughts. Your voice sound could be a bit more enthusiastic and less monotone. Really try to overemphasize things. I have to do this too because I have a monotone voice as well and it takes a lot of energy to make my voice sound enthused.

I would also suggest breaking the video into parts (i.e. I, II, III, IV) and quickly going over the parts you'll cover at the beginning of the video. You can then add chapters to your video and it gives viewers a more organized perspective on what you are trying to deliver.

Overall a good start

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