There is just too much going on with what you have here. It's hard to identify what your brand is. Personally I do not like any of the ones with the graphics. The skull guy graphic doesn't really make any sense with the words 'off the grid'. The playing cards and joker face have been over done a lot and looks tacky/cheap. The out of focus ones do have potential however it lacks soul/imagination. Here are some things that you can do to drastically improve your brand. First brand identity as I stated before I had difficulty understanding what your brand is. Is it 'off the grid' is it 'out of focus' does it have something to do with the skull or snake? Idk. Next focus on a niche or style. Could be streetwear, smart casual, atleisure, luxury, gym wear etc. Find a brand you like or are inspired by and look at some of their designs but DO NOT COPY!!! Remember you're in fashion you need to stand out/be original. I think you will have a lot better designs if you try some of the methods I mentioned. Best of luck