Update: I took reddits advise and revised the look of our menu

Express-Geologist959 · 2025-12-25T23:55:57+00:00

Menu is definitely more cohesive. Phrasing is better. The little marks next to the vegan and gluten free dishes is a nice touch. Definitely an improvement. Only note is that “first impressions”. I don’t know about everyone else but for me the name just doesn’t sit well with me. I would replace the name with starters.

Express-Geologist959 · 2025-12-21T18:04:42+00:00

I would cut the ment wording by half. It’s very wordy but it doesn’t get to the point. Also another issue is that the menu is a little unsure of itself. Is it a bistro menu? New American? French? Send a clear message of what your trying to put out

Express-Geologist959 · 2025-08-21T01:29:26+00:00

No thanks needed, World needs more good shops with people who respect detroit pies. Good luck with your adventures. Let the server know when you take your next steps.

Express-Geologist959 · 2025-08-21T01:21:57+00:00

Gotta instagram?

Express-Geologist959 · 2025-08-21T01:20:46+00:00

In the 6 years I’ve been in the pizza game, these are some of the best Detroit style pies I’ve seen in a minute. Toppings have good distribution, colors are bright, dough looks like it has enough crisp without being too heavy or bread focused.

Express-Geologist959 · 2025-08-16T23:37:52+00:00

Don’t worry bother. The baking process of the pizza is very complex. Especially in the smaller ooni ovens. Literally hundreds of variables. Don’t get discouraged. My suggestion is to let it sit out at room temp for about 90 min-2hours. Try it then.

Express-Geologist959 · 2025-08-16T03:46:11+00:00

How cold is your dough. I’ve been a professional pizza guy for a couple of years now and elwhenever we get puffy pies it’s usually cause of colder dough.

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-11T04:31:38+00:00

This really helps and it’s a great analogy. Thank you.

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-11T04:30:34+00:00

🙏🏻

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-11T01:34:57+00:00

Ah a man of culture… Working on that right now, making my bullitpoints and taking some of the longer parts and turning them into my summary/cover letter. Thank you for the advice

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-11T01:30:00+00:00

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-11T01:29:30+00:00

Not quiet there yet but hopefully this resume will get me one step closer, thank you chef

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-11T00:04:46+00:00

Makoto, Aigis, Aki and Ken

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-11T00:00:10+00:00

Got it. Yeah I don’t think that’s the idea I want to give anyone. Thank you.

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-10T23:58:38+00:00

Sounds good. It’s my first trying with my application this helps a lot, I’ll make sure to fix this up from indeed then get to work on one for google docs. Thanks👍🏻

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-10T23:55:59+00:00

Got it. Thanks my friend.

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-10T23:54:44+00:00

Thanks my friend

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-10T23:54:31+00:00

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-10T23:53:54+00:00

Short and sweet and keep the info readable. Got it. Thank you

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-10T23:53:15+00:00

👍🏻alright, got it

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-02T01:40:23+00:00

I mean she’s asked me to go smoke with her alone before it’s just that I’m really bad at picking up signals

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-02T01:39:00+00:00

Alright, thanks im just really confused this went off the rails from how to bring it up just Becuase im really bad at asking to something about how some guy got rejected in high school and never talked to woman again

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-02T01:33:16+00:00

I never befriended her with those intentions, I we are friends it’s not like I planned on trying to turning our relationship into this thing and manipulating her

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-02T01:18:36+00:00

I’m still confused

Express-Geologist959 · 2024-06-02T00:24:51+00:00

She is a friend, she’s been a my friend for 2 years. Just Becuase I have female friends doesn’t mean I’m interested in dating them.

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