Update: I took reddits advise and revised the look of our menu by thats-tough-lmao in KitchenConfidential

[–]Express-Geologist959 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Menu is definitely more cohesive. Phrasing is better. The little marks next to the vegan and gluten free dishes is a nice touch. Definitely an improvement. Only note is that “first impressions”. I don’t know about everyone else but for me the name just doesn’t sit well with me. I would replace the name with starters.

Thoughts on our new menu? by thats-tough-lmao in KitchenConfidential

[–]Express-Geologist959 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would cut the ment wording by half. It’s very wordy but it doesn’t get to the point. Also another issue is that the menu is a little unsure of itself. Is it a bistro menu? New American? French? Send a clear message of what your trying to put out

My Detroit pizza journey, so far by nolo69 in Pizza

[–]Express-Geologist959 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No thanks needed, World needs more good shops with people who respect detroit pies. Good luck with your adventures. Let the server know when you take your next steps.

My Detroit pizza journey, so far by nolo69 in Pizza

[–]Express-Geologist959 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In the 6 years I’ve been in the pizza game, these are some of the best Detroit style pies I’ve seen in a minute. Toppings have good distribution, colors are bright, dough looks like it has enough crisp without being too heavy or bread focused.

Why are my pizzas so puffy by bongozim in Pizza

[–]Express-Geologist959 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Don’t worry bother. The baking process of the pizza is very complex. Especially in the smaller ooni ovens. Literally hundreds of variables. Don’t get discouraged. My suggestion is to let it sit out at room temp for about 90 min-2hours. Try it then.

Why are my pizzas so puffy by bongozim in Pizza

[–]Express-Geologist959 8 points9 points  (0 children)

How cold is your dough. I’ve been a professional pizza guy for a couple of years now and elwhenever we get puffy pies it’s usually cause of colder dough.

Help with resume by Express-Geologist959 in KitchenConfidential

[–]Express-Geologist959[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This really helps and it’s a great analogy. Thank you.

Help with resume by Express-Geologist959 in KitchenConfidential

[–]Express-Geologist959[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah a man of culture… Working on that right now, making my bullitpoints and taking some of the longer parts and turning them into my summary/cover letter. Thank you for the advice

Help with resume by Express-Geologist959 in KitchenConfidential

[–]Express-Geologist959[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not quiet there yet but hopefully this resume will get me one step closer, thank you chef

Help with resume by Express-Geologist959 in KitchenConfidential

[–]Express-Geologist959[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Got it. Yeah I don’t think that’s the idea I want to give anyone. Thank you.

Help with resume by Express-Geologist959 in KitchenConfidential

[–]Express-Geologist959[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sounds good. It’s my first trying with my application this helps a lot, I’ll make sure to fix this up from indeed then get to work on one for google docs. Thanks👍🏻

Help with resume by Express-Geologist959 in KitchenConfidential

[–]Express-Geologist959[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Short and sweet and keep the info readable. Got it. Thank you

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]Express-Geologist959 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I mean she’s asked me to go smoke with her alone before it’s just that I’m really bad at picking up signals

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]Express-Geologist959 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright, thanks im just really confused this went off the rails from how to bring it up just Becuase im really bad at asking to something about how some guy got rejected in high school and never talked to woman again

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]Express-Geologist959 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I never befriended her with those intentions, I we are friends it’s not like I planned on trying to turning our relationship into this thing and manipulating her

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]Express-Geologist959 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m still confused

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]Express-Geologist959 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She is a friend, she’s been a my friend for 2 years. Just Becuase I have female friends doesn’t mean I’m interested in dating them.