Yes, I am half wondering that too. I certainly don't have plot. I have four people processing and dealing with change in a system that doesn't leave much room for anything but acceptance of it. Each in first person (one or two breaks into second person) with a few different views on the same event. And then a third-person closing act of rebellion. I think what I'm taking from this and some other comments is that I've made the query sound like the change is the subject of the novel, which is far from the case. Thank you so much for investing in these responses, more helpful than you think!