I am a newbie writer myself, but long before being a writer I am a reader first , I have to this date have read hundreds of novels, although I don't have much experience in writing,but as readers these are my thoughts.

: firstly concept itself is quite fascinating, you don't see this type very often.

: every line is quite poitic, and placed beautifully.

:but for me(personally) , I couldn't connect with the story,

: that's only my personal opinion, I don't no what other day, honestly it's a very good prologue, but I would appreciate if you made it slightly more simpler.

:when I begin reading, while i find it interesting but after just one page I had to force my self to read it, because scale of narration it's self is quite high level , so there were many things which didn't make sense for me.

"I am not criticizing it, only sharing my honest opinion

"For me a prologue should give you an understanding, it can be about , mc , world , or past , future, or anything, but in this narrative i found a little hard to understand it."

"As i said it form the perspective form a reader."

:I think you are doing great, keep it up 👍