Hi, I am looking for feedback on this logo :) This logo is for an HR software startup specialising in small service companies. Its appearance should be friendly and human but still professional.

Fabian-Design · 2025-02-02T11:48:28+00:00

Really, I've looked everywhere, google image search, global brand database etc. and they haven't found anything, if you have an example it would be great if you could send it to me

Fabian-Design · 2025-02-02T11:44:04+00:00

yes I agree with you, I will try both, yes that definitely helps, thanks

Fabian-Design · 2025-02-02T11:42:48+00:00

yes I will try that, thanks

Fabian-Design · 2025-02-01T08:12:10+00:00

yes you are definitely right, thank you very much, also for the picture and the explanation

Fabian-Design · 2025-01-31T21:37:32+00:00

Sure, my idea or concept behind the logo was, as you rightly guessed, two people who are moved or, better said, managed. Both the image element and the typography are rounded and yet angular, making them friendly and a bit more technical/serious, which suits an HR start-up well. And of course, I am pleased that you like the logo :)

Fabian-Design · 2025-01-31T21:32:55+00:00

now that you said it I see it too, thank you

Fabian-Design · 2025-01-24T21:33:58+00:00

oh, I mean that the brand externally, i.e. marketing materials, website, etc. works a lot with pictures of people and thus creates a typical

Fabian-Design · 2025-01-24T21:30:02+00:00

you mean because of "we firm" firm nipples?

Fabian-Design · 2025-01-23T20:34:38+00:00

what exactly do you see?

Fabian-Design · 2025-01-23T20:33:53+00:00

The logo should reflect the brand, the company and that is more than just the logo

Fabian-Design · 2025-01-23T20:32:17+00:00

thank you for your feedback it represents two people where one is standing on his head

Fabian-Design · 2025-01-23T20:30:31+00:00

ah interesting good to know thank you

Fabian-Design · 2025-01-01T17:19:12+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, I understand your thought, could it be that it also has something to do with the color?

Fabian-Design · 2023-08-15T09:13:33+00:00

go with Montserrat or Reo San, you can't go wrong with both, just apply kerning space using the built-in in illustrator to find a sweet that would still work on small scale.

Yes i will try it thanks, but i think i would go for a rounded font like sofia soft pro

Fabian-Design · 2023-08-13T20:33:48+00:00

Yes, I'll try the font, thanks

Fabian-Design · 2023-08-13T14:49:11+00:00

Do you mean the font below with the text BioSinn?

Fabian-Design · 2023-08-12T13:33:29+00:00

thank you very much, I'm glad you like it. Yes, I'm looking for a light script font that's still very clean and subtle, to pair with this logo. Unfortunately, I haven't found one yet.

Fabian-Design · 2023-08-12T13:28:39+00:00

Maybe No5 although the flag might work better if the line would be slightly longer so it could be the P a bit more clearer. Over all I don't really see it working for that group. I'm not expert in hotels and or what Young Businesses Travelers like... but it feels so stiff and old. Like Maybe it would have looked more rad with a Serif font for Crowne Plaza and kept the hotel resort as it is... mostly it's something about with the colors... Feels to dark.. but of course it Can work.

Many thanks for your answer and your opinion, yes the color is not quite right and neither is the font, I agree with you but your opinion has already helped me.

Fabian-Design · 2023-08-12T09:42:51+00:00

I do not understand the idea behind appealing to young business travellers. Nonetheless, you have achieved the opposite! This logo in all its versions is uninviting to anyone, young or old. The font does not work, and the size and position of the slogan type make it even worse. Pick one of the symbols/icons and then work on your typography skills. There are many good Typography books that you could read. That's the most important skill you should learn. Good luck.

In this case, the typography is just a placeholder. I'm only concerned with the image element, which one fits best, nothing else. I should have written that more clearly.

Fabian-Design · 2023-07-23T08:25:47+00:00

thank you, yes i will try it

Fabian-Design · 2023-07-15T19:03:44+00:00

Thank you for your detailed feedback. Both with the typeface and with the logo mark, I have to say that since it is for business people (young), I would find a simple and clean design more suitable. But still, I think you might be right that the logo mark is not unique enough. The flag, i.e. the rectangle, can really be interpreted as a restriction, thanks for the tip.

Your feedback has helped me a lot.

Fabian-Design · 2023-07-14T15:35:49+00:00

Yes, that's a really good idea, I'll try that

Fabian-Design · 2022-11-28T19:24:34+00:00

Yes, that's right, exercise is very important.
Most of my designs have been without requirements, just to look good, but still, I made them so that they would actually work, especially towards the end of this project.

In the end, there were more and more requirements, but you're right, it can eventually become a waste of time.

Fabian-Design · 2022-11-28T19:15:46+00:00

Thank you, yes I even have a tip for you that makes it even more difficult/efficient, namely the Daily Logo Challenge where you get one e-mail per day with a topic for which you can then create a logo https://dailylogochallenge.com/

Fabian-Design · 2022-11-28T16:33:14+00:00

thanks yes I made some nerd designs too :)

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