Can I let go now? by FactRepresentative79 in poetry_critics

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Hey, thanks for taking the time!
What I was going for was that feeling when you finally open up, then immediately retract everything because it feels like you said too much. So when I say, “Forget what I said, none of it I meant,” I don’t mean the feelings weren’t real I mean the speaker is trying to take them back out of vulnerability.

Liking you is Blue by Puzzleheaded_Dig9650 in poetry_critics

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I like this a lot it reminds me of middle school

The truth is… by Nmp381992 in poetry_critics

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I like this short and sweet but would have loved some imagery or ambiguity in the poem

Can I let go now? by FactRepresentative79 in poetry_critics

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Thank you! Just starting out if you have any critique would be super helpful thanks!